Maddy Sp Poet Classicism

Dusky Autumn

On the offshore of Atlantic ocean, - On the offshore of Atlantic ocean,
Walking on the bridge of hurricane,Intensifying force of wind hit my soul.
Empty streets with no one around,Paving away the roads of silly love.
Turning skies into grey,
We both freaking near the bay,
Freezing rain drizzled away,
Snow rain sizzled with a hope of ray!

Ohhhh my god,It's damn awesome!
Abundance of Lush green meadows was the season's feather.
Into the red,yellow,purple,brown,The transition of leaves,Echoed the sense of melancholic reflection.
Showering and Turning my dark days into bright, Its time to bloom with an early sunrise.

Bizarre cloud,dusty storm,
Love spouted between the two egoed rabbits.
Bursting the introvert feelings,cherishing the moments together at the street's of luxe ville.
Left an Autumn of love in our heart!

Light sun curvature reflecting against my eyes,
Awned wheatgrass,cold wind wrapping us,moving into the world of fantasy.
Beating down, The rhythm and blues, shaking the jazz with a sip of jigger!

Mild night temperature with deep brown  coffee,
Amorously advancing towards romance,
Nature taking the baby steps,dissolving in the essence of season,Gladly applauding Your arrival ,warmly welcoming an Autumn!

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2014 at 11:37 PM a passionate write. I bet it could have placed higher if it were kept at the seven line limit! Congrats on the winners' list. Maddy Sp March 3, 2015 at 12:45 AM Thanks Andrea for your kind appreciation..thanks a ton dear.. @@Madhavi

Kayod5 Kayode December 28, 2014 at 11:52 AM Good thinking Madhavi,congrats on the win...huggs Maddy Sp March 3, 2015 at 12:44 AM Thanks Kayods for your kind appreciation.. @@mads

Jan Allison December 28, 2014 at 11:10 AM very creative write - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Maddy Sp March 3, 2015 at 12:45 AM Thanks JAN for your kind appreciation!! @@mads

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 10:18 AM Madhavi, Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Maddy Sp March 3, 2015 at 12:46 AM Thanks PD, for your kind appreciation!! @@mads

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty September 10, 2014 at 12:05 PM welcoming an Autumn with deep brown coffee ? Huh? Dusky, really. Loved your lines like "Showering and Turning my dark days into bright, Its time to bloom with an early sunrise"or "The rhythm and blues, shaking the jazz with a sip of jigger!" or "Love spouted between the two egoed rabbits".Your words jig, your colors spread out to welcome Autumn. Extremely good image. Thank you. Love. Maddy Sp September 12, 2014 at 5:18 AM Thanks Rajat,It means a lot,thanks for sharing your time and appreciating my lines!! @mads