Dusk's Glamour

Dusk, the end of day, harbinger of effervescent night
see how dusk slinks to night in shadowed rivulets
running, rivulets of blue black; see how it puddles
outlining the corpse of cypress, puddles faded and fated
for the fated depth of moonless dark fills with siren sounds.
The scratching sound of thorn on glass, the howl of wind
a whispering wind, shroud winding through the forests edge
calling toward the unkempt edge of garden bed
where bedded was the maudlin maid of ending day. 
Day, a dusky wench who, yet again, glamours the light,
perfuming light the air with vapors which taunt,
taunt the dim and omnipresent night.   



Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest: Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk
Date: 8/5/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/21/2012 11:45:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Debbie xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:31:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win...well deserved!
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:47:00 AM
Debbie belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 12:35:00 PM
You let this form flow with such ease, cher!...like your description of day as 'a dusky wench'...have a fine day my friend! - Tim
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:26:00 AM
wow, an amazing poem, Debs. Glad I got to see it as I go thru the list. Truly one of the best in the contest. Congrats.
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:20:00 AM
A great write here Debi!Congrats on the win!
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:46:00 AM
debbie, you are one of the few who can mix gentleness with edginess... fine, fine write!... congrats on your stunning win in my contest (from the bottom of my soul's gut!)..:) huggs
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:45:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on a lovely winning wreath.
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:58:00 PM
debbie..kindly check these lines: where bedded was the maudlin maid of ending day. / A dusky wench who, yet again, glamours the light... can't find last word DAY being used in the next line... or is it my eyesight??? best of luck!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/10/2012 9:58:00 PM
Actually shivered during line 6....and your last 4 lines take the poem to another realm ...what an evening delight!
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful composed poem Debbie - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/6/2012 4:39:00 AM
a lovely poem. i like the way you've connected the words from one line to the next - very cleverly done!
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Date: 8/5/2012 8:46:00 PM
Debbie, this is a lovely poem, with many lovely senses described. I think nette wanted 12 lines, though.
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