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Dusk and Love

The day subsides, the sun descends,
A massive disc dipping into the horizon.
The tides ebb, waves lap the shore
Dusk holds sway: I fall into deep thought:
I wonder about the whys and wherefores
Of all the hustle and bustle of days of yore.
 
Quickly my thoughts revolve on you,
Deeper and deeper with yearning strong.
But now 'tis dusk and the orange tinge
Gives way to gray.  The mighty sea calms
Like an unslept bed, its waves seem like whispers
Of days gone by: the ways of love,
The late goodbyes, the promise of the morrow,
And of undying love.
 
Dusk is now blackened like your silken tresses,
Dusk is now dewy like your luscious lips.
Still I feel your warmth, your exquisite fragrance,
The close embrace, observe with longing
The brilliant brown eyes as they stare into mine.
Now it's too dark, dreams fade away.
There is one thing left in this gathering gloom.
That's to wait patiently for your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/4/2021 9:07:00 AM
Wonderful Victor love your writes well done.
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Date: 12/17/2020 5:00:00 AM
L O V E L Y verse. God bless you
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Date: 12/17/2020 4:25:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic work that is descriptive and expressive. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/17/2020 1:32:00 AM
A beautiful poem with great imagery Victor. Great imagination with apt choice of words. Enjoyed reading this. Have a blessed great day. :) ~ Ani
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Date: 12/16/2020 6:30:00 PM
I fell in love with this beautiful verse. True love last forever... Loneliness doesn't... Lovely memories help to keep each other close to your heart .. Take care... Shirley
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Date: 12/16/2020 5:39:00 PM
Dusk is my favorite time of the day. Magnificent poem, Victor :)
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:16:00 PM
stunningly beautiful, Victor. Keep it up with the beautiful writing.
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Date: 12/16/2020 3:23:00 PM
That’s lovely and romantic Victor, the image conjured up with the sunset o’er the calming sea and the silken tresses of your brown eyed love with luscious lips is beautiful to me. All the best... Belle
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Date: 12/16/2020 2:54:00 PM
WoW! Victor, During the holiday season or no reason at all, one thinks of their true love; there are some lovely lines within this write. Thanks for sharing such a write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/16/2020 5:48:00 AM
The mighty sea calms/Like an unslept bed...beautiful line!
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Date: 12/16/2020 5:43:00 AM
- Beautiful about true love, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2020 5:24:00 AM
Brilliant images of the descending day into the dusk and night-- intertwined with words missing love. Lovely emotive write, Victor.
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:56:00 AM
Christmas I find is a very emotional time and we do reflect and look back and remember those no longer with us. Tom
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:43:00 AM
Beautiful verse , Victor. The holidays does have a way of bringing back wonderful memories, but with it a yearn for their presence . We keep loving them . I just reach over and pretend, pat his leg , and say I love you. Hugs my friend and stay healthy.
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