Dusk and Dawn

We dont get along
Had it been from the very start 
Nuances and whispers
The thought of you
Was what I pursued

I perceive and give the rest to you
I get half and you get full
At dusk your poems subdue
Grey-looking and hardly anew

I had never really met you,
All I saw was your face glistening 
On the oceans surface
Dazzling eyes looking afar

Separate we shall be, and-
So if the Sun calls you one last time
Remember to wave from afar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Agustin Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 6:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Aljboor Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words
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