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Dusk

As dusk dims a cobalt sky, stars unveil their timid light. And a sanguine sun feigns death as shadows morph into night. Clouds gather into a shroud edged in magenta and gray. And night's curtain slowly drops, announcing the end of day. Merging with body and soul, myth and reality meet. And depositing dewdrops, moist breezes offset the heat. Creatures of dusk awaken in a world that's very still. For silence is its loudest when wildlife bends to its will.

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Date: 11/25/2020 10:42:00 AM
Quite nice! Very lyrical, quite lovely really--great ending stanza too--congrats Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/25/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thanks L.J., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/24/2020 5:12:00 AM
Emile,f you would like to soupmail a link thereto I'll add it to the thank you blog to Line
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Date: 11/24/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thanks Brian, I soupmailed you my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/24/2020 3:59:00 AM
Lovely, dear friend. I enjoyed this. Congrats on your win in Line's contest. God bless you
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Date: 11/24/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/24/2020 3:39:00 AM
Emile, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Date: 11/24/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Constance, As always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/26/2018 9:59:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Emile. "As dusk inks a cobalt sky". Love the dramatic line "the setting sun feigns death". Love that MIDWAY you have the line "myth and reality meet" introducing fairies and creatures of the night. Love even more the line "silence screams its loudest". You guessed it, it's a FAVE for me.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 1:50:00 PM
Descriptive poem it's beautifully adorned. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/17/2015 9:46:00 AM
Love this, Emile. I give it a seven. Beautifully written. Thanks.
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Date: 2/17/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thanks again Cona, you bring a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:06:00 PM
Such a beautiful poetic painting, Emile, of lovely dusk when all is still and peaceful at the end of the day. 7 Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:17:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, Your warm words have warmed my heart. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:06:00 PM
What an eye for words... wonderful !!
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Date: 2/16/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks again Debra, your friendly words are welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 2:20:00 PM
Nice effort, Emile...I enjoyed the read! :) john.
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 11:40:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, great pen. I have so enjoyed reading this amazing flow of words. A 7 from me. Hugs to you on this blessed day. Janet
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Janet, your kind words are very appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 11:24:00 AM
Excellent pen Emile! Well written piece, my dear friend. I truly enjoyed it! A 7 from me! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) D"
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:14:00 PM
Dorian, you always bring a smile to my day as I bask in the after glow of your praise, thanks. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 10:40:00 AM
And the fairies weep dewdrops wow so its so tasty...love Emile
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for your support I appreciate it. Emile.

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