Dusk

falling throne of sun when the stars unleash their bright... cold tranquil conquers August 14,2022 For nature themed haiku poetry contest Sponsored by: Tania kitchin Count check: howmanysyllables.com

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:25:00 PM

I love this time of day. Great job portraying it. Congrats for your win

Amateur Poetess
Date: 8/26/2022 2:10:00 AM

Thank you

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:44:00 AM

"falling throne of sun" - Beautiful metaphor. Congratulations!

Amateur Poetess
Date: 8/24/2022 10:00:00 PM

Thank you ??

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2022 7:03:00 AM

This makes me feel chilly :) Congratulations on your win! Linda Alice

Amateur Poetess
Date: 8/24/2022 10:00:00 PM

Thank you

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:09:00 AM

Amateur Poetess, congratulations on your winning placement with your splendid haiku!

Amateur Poetess
Date: 8/24/2022 9:59:00 PM

Thank you ??

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/14/2022 4:04:00 AM

Enjoyed this one!

Amateur Poetess
Date: 8/14/2022 4:09:00 AM

Thank you