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During the Darkness

found myself in the dark cried out for help but darker it was for anyone' to hear my cry for. darker it was for sight darkness dwelled through the veins traveled through organs and all of the pieces of my body darkness tied me up hands,feets ... For Master of it all it was nothing above his power he found me, he head me he was there,when no one was!

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Date: 7/16/2016 12:35:00 AM
Hi Nomthandazo. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:51:00 AM
Nomthandazo Skhosana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Nomthandazo Skhosana
Date: 5/24/2016 5:38:00 AM
Hey Skat, what a warm welcome, thank you sweetheart i don't know you but i can tell you as sweet as a sweet itself or even sweeter i guess, well am still a developing South African female poet, and a college student, i so love poetry it is actually my life, i speak, i walk, I live Poetry. that's a short version of myself.
Date: 5/19/2016 7:55:00 AM
Nomthandazo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Nomthandazo Skhosana
Date: 5/24/2016 5:43:00 AM
Hey Linda what a pleasure to meet loving souls, surely i must say am already feeling like i found a heart home, you guys are awesome i took a glance at all of your poems and well with no doubt you are truly gifted, am not as gifted as you are but am just blessed with rhyming and writing skills, i write everyday, what i see, what i feel i just write. i could say poetry is my life.

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