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Duplex

Villain

Caged in
boxed-in
in love
with a
villain

Handcuff
to evil
nowhere
to run
away

Turned light
to dim
fond of
stealing
peace; joy
 
Closed hand
bruised face
regret
repeat
please stop

Thoughts of
slaying
villain
escape
bondage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/11/2016 4:49:00 AM
Hi Patrice, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Alexis... God bless
Date: 12/11/2016 12:20:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Darren... God bless...
Date: 12/10/2016 7:16:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Patrice:-) I found your imagery quite chilling in this sad poem:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thank you Jan I really appreciate your response and honesty... God bless
Date: 12/8/2016 1:08:00 PM
Owww, that is recognizable, caged without a cage, painful strong poem.... Good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/8/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Darren White I really appreciate your feed back...
Date: 12/8/2016 9:23:00 AM
A nice Duplex ... best wishes ...
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Date: 12/8/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Probir... God bless

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