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Duplex

Bitter Sweet Revenge 

                  Your love 
                  hurts me
                    I think
                     about
                    hurting
                   you bad


                  Why did
               you change
                       into
                  a beast?


                   I want
                   you to
                 know pain
                    deeply 


                Why Punch
                  me So?    
               What have
                   I done?



                  Hired a
               known thug
                  to scare
               you straight 

 
                 I called  
                  it off 
                 good bye


12-6-16
Contest: Duplex 
Sponsor: Jan Allison 

Using duplex form
(2-syllables each line
 to line A story)

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Sandra Haight Date: 12/11/2016 7:57:00 PM Powerful Duplex poem, Alexis! Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Afzal Nusker Date: 12/11/2016 12:49:00 PM Very well written. Congratulations. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 12:53:00 PM Hi Afzal, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Tamal Kundu Date: 12/11/2016 8:25:00 AM Powerful read. Congratulations, Alexis. :) Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 8:30:00 AM Hi Tamal, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Darren White Date: 12/11/2016 12:01:00 AM Coming back to say this: you and your thug won :) Congratulations! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 8:32:00 AM Hi Darren, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate us Lol! :-) Alexis

Jeff Davies Date: 12/10/2016 10:31:00 PM You write with honesty Alexis. Congratulations on the win! Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 8:33:00 AM Hi Jeff, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Agnes Krampe Date: 12/10/2016 8:03:00 PM Congrats on your win, Alexis. Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 8:33:00 AM Hi Agnes, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Jan Allison Date: 12/10/2016 6:41:00 PM your powerful words packed a punch Alexis!!!! Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 12/10/2016 6:59:00 PM Hi Jan, You held a good contest. It was my pleasure to participate in such a awesome contest:-)Alexis

Peter Dome Date: 12/8/2016 11:19:00 AM I agree with Freddie below. I hate violence especially against women and kids. Hope you win. Best wishes. Pete. Hope it's not true. Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/7/2016 12:14:00 PM Wow! Some scary stuff, Alexis. You know how to some fear in someone w/this poem. Dark and cool. She called it off though, that was good. Ha ha ha. Hope you do well in the contest. Love you always. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/7/2016 10:40:00 AM Very good for the contest, Alexis... It makes me mad that some think we are there possession and they can do what they wish with us... Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 12/7/2016 8:29:00 AM Thug hug his mug. Great idea! Very sad and all too common occurence:-( Well stated Alexis. Huggsies ~ john Login to Reply

Paloma P Date: 12/7/2016 5:22:00 AM Glad to see you've given abuse a voice, these guys are bullies, a 'known thug' would have served him up his just desserts. Good luck with the contest Alexis. Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 12/7/2016 1:19:00 AM Hired a known thug! That's a way to deal with this, wonderful... Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/7/2016 12:57:00 AM IT's great, Alexis (I canceled is 3 syllables.) Login to Reply

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe Date: 12/7/2016 12:37:00 AM So many sad poems with this subject - well written Alexis Regards, Mark Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 12/6/2016 3:45:00 PM I'm trying to write one of these right now, it's not easy...but you sure made it look that way. This was fantastic Alexis. You will do well in this contest. Login to Reply