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Dunnock

feel the hedge the dunnock had slept its lines a scribble toddlers had drawn he nested in a pen test on scrap paper edging fields in barbed wire branches sleep static acrobats on frozen trapeze

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Date: 10/31/2023 11:48:00 PM
Ah i didnt know what is a dunnock too had to google , but your explanation below helped. I love the way youve written this. Your way with writing is so unique and creative! Absolutely loved reading this especially “ its lines a scribble toddlers had drawn“ and the last line! Sending you light today and always
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/1/2023 12:06:00 AM
Thank you for your time and support in reading and commenting on my poem, it means a lot

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