Dunblane

Dunblane
                         
                                        
A senseless waste
These young live lost
Let's all stop to count the cost

Melissa, Charlotte,
Kevin and Ross
All over the world they will mourn your loss

A town United
In grief and pain
We all share the sadness of Dunblane

Victoria, Emma,
Mhairi and Dave
All the world will weep at your grave

When at the gates
They waved you goodbye
No-one could have known that you would die

Abigail,Emily,
Sophie and John
Once bright young and lively now all of you gone

Your whole lives before you
Still left to live
So much time remaining so much left to give

Hannah, Megan,
Joanna and Brett
In all of our hearts you are living yet

Spare a thought for Gwen Mayor
Their teacher so brave
Who gave up her life her pupils to save

So let’s learn the lesson
And maybe then
We can ensure it won’t happen again
That's the best tribute
To the kids of Dunblane
That their innocent blood was not shed in vain

By Denis Briggs


(On 13th march 1996 at 9:30 am Thomas Hamilton broke into a primary school in Dunblane Scotland and shot 16 children and one teacher dead. The whole world was shocked and it was dubbed the Dunblane Massacre)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/5/2021 9:11:00 AM
Some 25 years ago on my wife's birthday. So sorry. Dunblane, Scotland. This is the first I ever heard of it. Thanks for sharing. "Let's all stop to count the cost".
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Date: 3/3/2021 10:28:00 AM
So much tragedy! Great poem about each of those who were killed. Well written.
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Date: 3/3/2021 10:15:00 AM
I thought this poem was a loving tribute to the people/children whose lives were taken or damaged by what transpired at that time in the history of our world. Very beautifully put!!
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Date: 3/3/2021 8:28:00 AM
Dennis, a beautiful moving tribute to those innocent children whose lives were stolen from them. I read some of your other work, it is very impressive; your style and deep emotion for humankind is exceptional! Take Care, Paulette
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:16:00 PM
A beautiful tribute Denis, to those that lost their lives in that terrible tragedy. Regard's Tom
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