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Written 1/19/25 for Dumpster Fire contest

Once you were object of my desire Kisses that lifted me higher and higher Your mask came off Fantasy was then lost This love story is a dumpster fire

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FJ Thomas

Date: 2/24/2025 8:00:00 PM

Well if that's not a 'mic-drop' I don't know what is! Nice one Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 2/24/2025 8:04:00 PM

Thanks Fj!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2025 9:41:00 PM

My ex-husband was like that thank goodness he’s my ex. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/21/2025 7:06:00 AM

So glad you moved on! Thanks Eve

Christopher Delegans

Date: 1/19/2025 10:02:00 PM

A good ole cloak and dagger tale. Well done!

Karen Jones
Date: 1/20/2025 3:57:00 AM

I am glad you like it Christopher! Thanks

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2025 9:01:00 PM

Ha, ha! A surefire winner. (Pun intended). ~ Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 1/20/2025 3:56:00 AM

lol thanks dear Gershon!

Komal Walimbe

Date: 1/19/2025 8:44:00 PM

Great verse Karen! All the best and hope you have a great day:)

Karen Jones
Date: 1/20/2025 3:55:00 AM

Komal thanks and good day to you as well!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/19/2025 9:16:00 AM

Good one, Karen: Excellent flowing verse and premise. A real winner. SuZ

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 10:00:00 AM

Wow! Thanks for believing in me Suz!

John Read

Date: 1/19/2025 4:04:00 AM

A love that went up in flames, good luck in the contest Karen. xx

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 5:53:00 AM

Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2025 2:37:00 AM

- You never know what's hiding behind the mask... good thing you found his real face... and dumped him :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 2:48:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise! Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2025 2:02:00 AM

Perfect limerick. Should rate high.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 2:47:00 AM

Really? Thanks Victor!