Dumbstruck Dumb-Luck

The soft curves of your smile,
    echoing mile after mile.
Not reminiscent of a grandma,
    but rather, a banana.

Your glowing doughy eyes,
    look as squishy as thy thighs.
You create a fervent need,
    akin to a vampire, lusting to feed.

You send my brain a-boiling,
    as a custard that is spoiling!
Left unable to speak or think,
    A simple blank stare, forgetting to blink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Sidwell Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Well, that was fun! Great poem! Congrats on the win!
Hill Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 2:43 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it, and for the compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Hawley Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Hill Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Thank you so much!! It was so much fun, might be my favorite contest so far :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Congrats!
Hill Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Thank you! :)
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