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Dumb Mirror

Mirror mirror on the wall Who is the fairest of them all? Sure not you, you silly dope In this field you have no hope. Mirror mirror judge of all Can't you see some beauty small If its there its sure hid That's why I answered as I did All your teeth have fallen out You have wrinkles all about Most all your hair has gone away What is left is turning grey And your chin is double now A stomach that would fit a cow In heavy folds your skin doth sag To tell the truth your just a hag And as I thought to answer back The glass hung there began to crack It shattered and fell to the floor To end its lies forevermore For my Grandfather........He gets it...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/16/2016 8:47:00 AM
Mirrors are more honest than any of us and not easily given to taking bribes. Thank you for reading my work. / M
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:52:00 PM
Hi Jai, ha, good one. SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:09:00 AM
Did you mean Dumb Mirror?? This was a fun one.
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:46:00 PM
Hi Jai, HAHA, I hope it was your grandfather who dropped the mirror. You are great with rhyme and flow... Awesome DUMB mirror poem. You made me chuckle. LINDA
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Date: 5/24/2016 5:30:00 AM
Hey Poet,My times running out.just wanted to say all is ''well''and hope your.Be dangerous,no seatbelts....