Dum Dee Dum Dumb

Said Tweedle Dee to Tweedle Dum
Perhaps the time has finally come,
For us to pick out different names,
And stop our playing at childish games.

Dum was sure that he couldn’t agree more,
And the reason was far too big to ignore.
Having names that made people delirious,
Meant that no one ever took them too serious.

So they decided that neither would speak
Until they met on the coming week
And then the two would happily share
The names that each would pick for the pair.

Then said Tweedle Dum to Tweedle Dee,
What names have you picked for you and me?
Whatever they are I will protest
As the names I’ve chosen I’m sure are the best.

Said Dee to Dum if that’s the case
Let’s share the names face to face.
Standing nose to nose Dum said to Dee
Let’s say them both on the count of three.

And when the count was said and done,
They both said Tweedles Dee and Dum.
It seems Dum had wished to be Dee,
And the opposite went for Dee you see.

So now they are happy with their names,
And they’re playing again at childish games.
The choice they made you must agree
Was the perfect solution for Dum and Dee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest, Tony. A delightful read. Love, Annalise
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September 21, 2011 at 4:16 PM
A rose by any other name would be as sweet..Enjoyed your work..Very creative for sure..Thanks for the encouragind comment on my work about my work "Comfortable".I had gotten into a comfort zone of coming on and getting this done and that done in a certain length of time but not my writing of poems no that takes time...Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Congrats Tony on a wonderful win with this dynamic entry luv... great write..
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Tony. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Nicely done, Tony. Congrats on your win! Kim
Jones Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 6:16 PM
OMG, Tony... LOVE this! Couldn't wait to see how it ended! hey, you've been south recently.. is the part of the country I'm spawned from :) Beauty eve, ~N
Onclaud Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 3:23 PM
this cracks me up in a most charming way, tony... more! :) hugggs, nette
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:16 PM
I totally loved this. What a great rhyme for a children's book. Gret job. God Bless, JB I hope you and your wife both get well soon. I'm really sick here.
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