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Dum Bee

I was sitting inside the gazebo eating a hot dog watching the swans swim in the beautiful lake it came out of nowhere buzzing round the place tumbling and bumbling read to do bite and sting I hurried to my backpack to get my epi pen but already the swelling had begun I froze when I saw the size of the bee that bit me it took a gardener and a stranger to inject me I never saw what happened next, cuz I fainted but the next thing I knew I was sipping koolaid from a plastic cup and wearing a wet compress all this fuss because of a bad reaction, dum bee. Nov 30, 2019 Not for contest.

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Date: 11/30/2019 11:53:00 PM
Nicely done my friend. It is nothing to laugh about... Allergies can be deadly and a small bee can do it.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/30/2019 6:27:00 PM
Oh, that sure sounds like a bad reaction. You described the incident well with this poem :)
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