Dulcet Melody - Itty Bitty

The rhythm of the rising sun
is a sweet song in the morn
And when that rhythm sets the sun
Luna's dulcet melody is born
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Macfarlane Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 5:29 AM
Wonderful write and win Joseph. Hugs
A  Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:34 PM
HI JOSEPH, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Joseph, :) Congratulations, In Andrea's Itty bitty contest.... Goodnight ~ Linda
Lawless Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Oh, you wascawy wabbit you. Who could not bow to "Luna's dulcet melody" Very nice, congrats
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Way to go with your winning work..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Simple yet mesmerising ! congrats on top win !
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:17 PM
It was just a simple little poem. but its lyrical quality and that final line captured my heart. First place to you!!! Just the kind of poem I wanted to see in my contest.
May Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 8:38 AM
Thank you for the top spot in your contest Andrea
Poteet Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Good contrasts here, Joseph, the music of sunrise and sunset are surprisingly similar in timbre and voice. Excellent itty-bitty.
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April 5, 2014 at 2:25 PM
- Beautiful! - Have a nice weekend, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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