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To our dear mate Darren White.

The closest bottle is always true. Wordsmiths say poets are a peculiar breed, To them, I say poetry is not your mead. Duir, night is not blue. We reach to the seas and across skies, While talking to a bartender in the tides. Duir, you give us the option to pursue, And words to reach more than one heart. We're grateful from the very start. Lilac wine awaits you. As a marble table holds The Tao you've read. Recover soft in your crimson covers. We'll be here with your song sung for others.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/13/2017 4:14:00 AM
A noble tribute beautifully wrought. John
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 2:40:00 AM
I'm so grateful to both of them, John :)
Date: 2/13/2017 2:38:00 AM
I forgot to add that you two write wonderfully together... It complements seamlessly. Knowing you both well, I THINK I know who wrote what, but that's unimportant.
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:26:00 PM
Ah, such a sentimental yet very sweet drink you offer here, WW. The love and the tenderness is felt w/each word flowing from your artistic pen. Beautiful poetry, my friend. Love and peace to you.
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White Wolf
Date: 2/10/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, RW! It has been a hectic few days so far, but I look forward to catching up with you on the soup my friend /|\
Date: 2/10/2017 3:45:00 AM
Deep, beautiful piece!!! Thanks for sharing with us!!! :-)
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White Wolf
Date: 2/10/2017 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy /|\
Date: 2/10/2017 12:23:00 AM
Oww Wes and Budgie! This is so beautiful :) You both make me cry happy tears :) You're such good friends, both of you, how can I not love you! Duir.
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Space Cadet
Date: 2/10/2017 1:15:00 AM
Glad the surgery is through and all went well. Keep on the Sunny Side :) - Wesley C.
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White Wolf
Date: 2/10/2017 12:28:00 AM
It was the very least that we could do! Just glad the surgery went well /|\
Date: 2/9/2017 6:05:00 AM
This is an amazing tribute for Darren, guys:) he'll love to read this and it's sure to help him recover quickly:)
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Jo, I loved this too :)
Date: 2/9/2017 4:08:00 AM
- Beautifully written to a friend who needs a little care this week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/8/2017 11:20:00 PM
This is beautiful! You both made a wonderful poem for Darren. He will love your words! And I do too <3
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Darren White
Date: 2/14/2017 2:42:00 AM
They did! I love them both <3
Date: 2/8/2017 4:30:00 PM
That's a great tribute, to an AMAZING person. You guys did great and Daren deserves this tribute and so much more. A great poem!!! Love you, Duir <3
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:48:00 PM
You are right he is amazing, thanks for stopping by, Claudia /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 1:50:00 PM
Great write x well done x
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 11:39:00 AM
Great collaboration and tribute hugs thank you for reading my poem "Where We Meet" Hugs
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:46:00 PM
It was my pleasure, Eve /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 8:59:00 AM
Caring tribute that shows the goodness of your hearts dear WW and SC! Congratulations!
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 8:40:00 AM
Beautiful guys
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thanks, Tim /|\
Date: 2/8/2017 6:22:00 AM
Nice collaboration and a wonderful tribute to a good friend. We will all sing that song. Bravo to both poets
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Space Cadet
Date: 2/8/2017 7:08:00 PM
:) Great to hear all went well. Thanks for posting this. Sending positive prayers to D.W.
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White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Chris! He is still in ICU, but the surgery was a success /|\

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