Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Duh

Has this ever happened to you, my friends
Was walking my sweetie down the lane
When out pops a sign post and belts me one
Rattles me and shakes up my brain

Was trying to impress my sweetie pie
There was nothing but love on my mind
No doubt my honey was quite unimpressed
Thought I was an idiot of some kind

Tried hard to pretend it was no big deal
As stars buzzed round in my noodle
Attempted to speak only gibberish came out
Affected my whole kit and caboodle

I've always been known as a bit of a klutz
But now try to avoid any shocks
My sweetie and me still enjoy the scenery
But I wear a helmet on our walks!

@Jack Ellison 2012

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Laura Breidenthal September 7, 2017 at 11:38 PM Ouch! Man, I love that ending Jack. Hilarious one. Clumsiness is cute! Gives us a reason to laugh. Always, Laura Jack Ellison September 8, 2017 at 6:56 AM Then I'm your man... Mister Clumsy I is!!! LOL xxx

Doris Culverhouse September 1, 2012 at 6:02 PM funny....get your helmet and lets go!! Jack Ellison September 1, 2012 at 8:23 PM Glad it gave you a giggle, dear Doris! Got my helmet on and I'm ready to go... LOL Love and hugs, Jack

Russell Sivey September 1, 2012 at 8:22 AM Ha ha, this is a very funny write Jack! I really enjoyed how it "affected (your) whole kit and caboodle" great rhyming with "noodle" on this one! I liked the story, Great Work!! Jack Ellison September 1, 2012 at 8:26 AM Hey a big thank you Russell! Glad it gave you a chuckle or two... your klutzy friend, Jack