Duel

 

When near the doomed dark hour drew, 
Dreadful deed descended through 
The tunnel trap, damp and dim, 
Where a duo met at their whim. 

Mundane motive - love triangle, 
Jealousy jailed in a tangle. 
Devoured by its fatal flame 
The foes counted steps to aim. 

To their demise, both aimed well -
To dire destiny  they fell. 
Double death that tunnel led 
On grim end light never shed. 

Femme Fatale kept her heartache 
For her future husband’s sake.

January 31, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Margarita.
Chamberlain Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Great poem, sounds messy, those triangles are never good! Congratulations on your winning placement.
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:22 AM
- A double death ... a tragic event, Margarita - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Great take and nicely presented Margarita. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Double death. Nice take on contest. Congratulations on your premier contest win. Take care Rama
Neumann Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Justice served? Congratulations, Kai
Gondolf Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:29 AM
A double death in the tunnel. Nicely written, Maggie, good luck in the contest. Hugs.
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