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Like when you raise a ship and be the first to feel its butt You can so be the victim of the beast you took from huts You’ve smiled, made love from time you flirted But now the eyes are open; he'll start t hurt Hurt you Hurt your feelings What you've been through Hurt your spirit Destroy your living Shatter your life and everything that has a meaning This is the meaning of good did in the world we live in Grown men stand for what they believe in Not walk along blinded by their feelings Love is the ****, the bone to cause all this killings Life is a stinking pit in which we swimming So don’t be surprised of the stinking' **** you see happening' So don’t catch a piteous glance when others are drowning' Life’s that thing life's anything but a golden casket Though it's a thing

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Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 1:18:00 PM

enjoying this one a second time. SKAT

Ibrahima Diaby

Date: 3/26/2015 1:19:00 PM

thank you so much funom,i appreciate

Funom Makama

Date: 3/26/2015 12:09:00 PM

This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Ibrahima Diaby

Date: 2/10/2015 11:00:00 AM

thank you very much lyric man,i saw one of ur porms and i really appeciated it,u're great.and thank you for encouraging me

Ibrahima Diaby

Date: 2/9/2015 10:28:00 AM

thank you very much linda,i appreciate...poetrysoup is really exciting and am overwelmed by all these onderfull poems from talented poets,wishing to improve my skills and get to know more great poets.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2015 4:06:00 PM

Ibrahim, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:13:00 PM

Ibrahima, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ibrahima Diaby

Date: 2/6/2015 5:57:00 AM

thanks i just flirt with the pen,and really want to improve my writing skills,I remain open to critics and any other appreciation

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/5/2015 11:43:00 AM

excellent pen here! Enjoyed your piece, dear friend. :) Love n hugs! xxx D.