Ibrahima Diaby Poet Rhyme

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Like when you raise a ship and be the first to feel its butt
You can so be the victim of the beast you took from huts
You’ve smiled, made love from time you flirted
 But now the eyes are open; he'll start t hurt
 Hurt you
Hurt your feelings
What you've been through
Hurt your spirit
Destroy your living
Shatter your life and everything that has a meaning
This is the meaning of good did in the world we live in
Grown men stand for what they believe in
Not walk along blinded by their feelings
Love is the ****, the bone to cause all this killings
Life is a stinking pit in which we swimming
So don’t be surprised of the stinking' **** you see happening'
So don’t catch a piteous glance when others are drowning'
Life’s that thing
life's anything but a golden casket
Though it's a thing

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Skat A January 18, 2016 at 1:18 PM enjoying this one a second time. SKAT

Ibrahima Diaby March 26, 2015 at 1:19 PM thank you so much funom,i appreciate

Funom Makama March 26, 2015 at 12:09 PM This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..

Ibrahima Diaby February 10, 2015 at 11:00 AM thank you very much lyric man,i saw one of ur porms and i really appeciated it,u're great.and thank you for encouraging me

Ibrahima Diaby February 9, 2015 at 10:28 AM thank you very much linda,i appreciate...poetrysoup is really exciting and am overwelmed by all these onderfull poems from talented poets,wishing to improve my skills and get to know more great poets.

Poet Destroyer A February 8, 2015 at 4:06 PM Ibrahim, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A February 8, 2015 at 3:13 PM Ibrahima, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ibrahima Diaby February 6, 2015 at 5:57 AM thanks i just flirt with the pen,and really want to improve my writing skills,I remain open to critics and any other appreciation

Dorian Petersen Potter February 5, 2015 at 11:43 AM excellent pen here! Enjoyed your piece, dear friend. :) Love n hugs! xxx D.