Duck

Shut the duck up Or is it a goose Always honking Noisy creature Shut the duck up Aflax!!! I knew that you would get in the last word! This is not meant to resemble anyone or anything.. Just written for fun! My sense of humor has returned! I have no idea what form it could be??? Entered into Andrea's contest...

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/19/2013 4:55:00 PM

This is very cute Sara, good win ;} ,,, you know Jefferson Starship also has a song called " Sara" as always thank you for coming to read THE RIDE ;}

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/20/2013 11:11:00 AM

Lol... Congrats on your grinning win~A.O

Donna Jones

Date: 4/20/2013 7:51:00 AM

Still Laughing! Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/19/2013 9:50:00 PM

Hi Sara, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@

Len Gasun

Date: 4/19/2013 9:42:00 PM

Many congrats my dear friend Sara! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the big smiles here! Thanks a lot also for enjoying my latest poem. Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora

Skat A

Date: 4/19/2013 8:39:00 PM

Sara, a sweet win~*~SKAT

Farida Akhtar

Date: 10/19/2012 10:42:00 AM

A delightful poem. I enjoyed reading it. I wish I could write like this. Thanks for your moral boosting comment on my poem Only For You. Coming from you I am feeling proud. -Farida

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/19/2012 8:55:00 AM

Whatever the ducking form it is, it works for me and the silly smile on my face. love, Kathy

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/18/2012 4:41:00 PM

whatever the form, it's a lot of fun! i enjoyed it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2012 2:07:00 PM

wow, Sara. this is incredibly good for a short funny one from you. FAVE

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/18/2012 1:55:00 PM

It is funny and I'm glad that you have a sense of humor. Could it be a funny farm, or a funny form. Just invented that one. Many blessings. Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/18/2012 1:10:00 PM

I'm glad you put it under free verse and not the dreaded I don't know Form! This is a terrific write, one with a great sense of humor within it! Spectacular poem my friend, with the funny lines inside! I really enjoyed this clever write, wondrous piece, Great Work!!