Reason A. Poteet Poet Rhyme

Dual Forces Duel

Both speed and intensity,
obstacles on earth’s great sea.
Srong gales top the weather charts
vying winds of valiant hearts.

Freezing forces whip about,
crowded in the hold we pray.
Faith duels with fear and doubt.
Ahoy! ahead! dawn’s new day.


written May 31, 2018
Eight Lines, (Nature) Joseph May

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Eve Roper June 5, 2018 at 10:53 AM Reason, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Reason A. Poteet June 6, 2018 at 1:29 PM Appreciate the comment and the commendation, Eve. Have a great day delving into poetry.

Susan Gentry June 4, 2018 at 12:34 AM Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this. Reason A. Poteet June 4, 2018 at 7:42 AM thanks, Susan, I welcome your read and reply.

Line Gauthier June 3, 2018 at 9:17 PM Congrats on your top win, Reason. Reason A. Poteet June 6, 2018 at 1:29 PM Tis appreciated by the writer, most of all, I welcome your recognition of the placement.

Carrie Richards June 3, 2018 at 8:48 PM I was hanging on for the ride! Well done Reason !! You had me praying for dry land! :) Reason A. Poteet June 6, 2018 at 1:30 PM Love your comment, Carrie, all prayers welcomed in such a tale as that one. Thanks.

Joseph May June 3, 2018 at 7:49 PM Battling stormy seas..Congrats on your win Reason Reason A. Poteet June 4, 2018 at 7:43 AM Appreciate the placement, Joseph, a trip I've make quite often.