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du Maurier

The door opens, but I am not the new Mrs. de Winter, just an awkward shadow slipping into normalcy, where words are thicker than hardcovers— silence clinging like dust to the spines of books with torn out pages. I wander, but do not answer. The air is full of Maxim’s secrets, dreadful weights of things unsaid— longings for something that has slipped through time. A voice stirs, a name floating, half-heard through the Manderley of my mind of forgotten conversations— mine, or someone else’s? I can’t say. Then, he moves— pulling du Maurier from the shelf, as if it was never meant to be out of reach. I watch, but cannot touch. In the end, I fumble on words saying foolish things like “itty-bitty” trying not to say too much—but every time I speak self-idiocy mocks the darkened expanses of my wild, Cornwall brain. “You’re not stupid,” he says, as if the thought had been his all along, and I am startled, not by the words, but by the shipwreck of them— the knowing. 2.22.25

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Date: 3/19/2025 8:43:00 AM
Dear Laura, Wow, your poem is absolutely stunning! I felt like I was right there, wandering through Manderley with you. I love how you mix in du Maurier and the tension of unspoken words, so haunting! You have a real gift for expressing complex emotions. I can't wait to read more of your work! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/21/2025 4:10:00 AM
Daniel— thank you. Your comment is so uplifting to me.. I’m looking forward to diving into more of your work as well. Your kind words mean the world <3 Laura
Date: 3/17/2025 7:55:00 PM
Bravo Poetess...now you know the secret of the self conscious seduction. Great storytelling, intriguing...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/21/2025 4:09:00 AM
Thank you Justin… I’ve always adored the tension and the poetically rich expression of du Maurier. Loved weaving her into the moment<3 Laura

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