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Dry Tree In Window

dry tree in window lonely cuckoo softly sings tender leaves may come By Tahera Mannan Contest- Aa Haiku from your Window Sponsor- Micheal J Falotico

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 2:05:00 PM

awww, is this what you see, a little cuckoo bird there? How utterly charming! luv the ending too.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/7/2011 8:03:00 PM

Written as well as any haiku can be. Michael should like this one.

Constance La France

Date: 2/7/2011 4:55:00 PM

Thanks for commenting on my blog and this haiku is just enchanting and divine~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/7/2011 1:07:00 PM

Vasant panchmi is just a day ahead, I think it's spring in india. yesterday we celebrated the Panchmi in a Hindu temple, nice scene from your window, Tahera

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/7/2011 8:31:00 AM

oh...love this description.....I can even hear the sound of the cuckoo!! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2011 5:37:00 AM

wonderful imagery, good luck with this excellent entry, Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2011 4:12:00 AM

majestic , melodic images, tahera!! whew... winning wishes to you..:) hugggs, nette

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 2/7/2011 2:51:00 AM

this is really a beautiful haiku

Kash Poet

Date: 2/7/2011 2:10:00 AM

A nice Haiku declaring the advent of spring here in India-kashinath

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2011 9:18:00 PM

Hi! Tahera, how are you.. I like this haiku.. It's the view I have with out the bird.. But, the leaves will come.. I live in a part of Texas, where the blooming is happening already softly,.. take care,..p.d.