Dry Tree In Window

dry tree in window
lonely cuckoo softly sings
tender leaves may come

By Tahera Mannan
Contest- Aa Haiku from your Window
Sponsor- Micheal J Falotico
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 2:05 PM
awww, is this what you see, a little cuckoo bird there? How utterly charming! luv the ending too.
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Written as well as any haiku can be. Michael should like this one.
La France Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Thanks for commenting on my blog and this haiku is just enchanting and divine~~
Mehta Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Vasant panchmi is just a day ahead, I think it's spring in india. yesterday we celebrated the Panchmi in a Hindu temple, nice scene from your window, Tahera
Richards Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 8:31 AM
oh...love this description.....I can even hear the sound of the cuckoo!! :)
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:37 AM
wonderful imagery, good luck with this excellent entry, Harry
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 4:12 AM
majestic , melodic images, tahera!! whew... winning wishes to you..:) hugggs, nette
Oimbo Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 2:51 AM
this is really a beautiful haiku
Poet Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 2:10 AM
A nice Haiku declaring the advent of spring here in India-kashinath
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February 6, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Hi! Tahera, how are you.. I like this haiku.. It's the view I have with out the bird.. But, the leaves will come.. I live in a part of Texas, where the blooming is happening already softly,.. take care,..p.d.
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