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flurry of dead leaves turn and turn and turn in twirls both rowdy and mute
Written: December 05, 2022

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Date: 12/7/2022 1:21:00 PM
I really enjoyed this!
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Date: 12/6/2022 2:13:00 PM
Their muteness is changed in a twinkling of an eye with the winds help. I enjoyed reading this one today. Very descriptive. thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. A very nice snap of such a lovely fall scene. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Our front yard, the top of the house is covered with red oak leaves, but they are not dry as of right now. Sara
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Date: 12/6/2022 12:29:00 PM
- after the first winter storm ... everything is gone ... lovely described, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 12/6/2022 10:52:00 AM
Spectacular, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.
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Date: 12/6/2022 9:48:00 AM
I love the last line Sotto ! Poignant and descriptive . So much said in a few words . Susan :)
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Date: 12/6/2022 6:33:00 AM
Well done. I like that. Rowdy and mute :)
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Date: 12/6/2022 5:50:00 AM
The ending line well describes the decaying leaves.
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Date: 12/5/2022 9:24:00 PM
These dry leaves will turn and turn with every wisp of wind. Rowdy or mute, their fate is the same. They will finally dissolve in the soil....! A beautiful haiku....
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