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Dry Dream World

In the dry dream world
There isn’t much normalcy 
Just strange occurrences here
Can be horrid pain
That of incredible form
Nothing like reality

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2014 at 2:59 PM

reminds me of the idea that our life is actually the dream and our dreams are the reality. Which would mean you would be talking about our lives when we are awake.

Richard Lamoureux

March 8, 2014 at 9:04 AM

It sounds like a nightmare. You have given substance to the darkness in just a few lines.

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 8, 2014 at 5:30 AM

Wisdom in a nutshell! Beautiful!

Len Gasun

March 7, 2014 at 9:23 PM

This is superb write and form which you've creatively composed in just few lines my dear friend Russell! I love it and kudos to you as always! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

March 7, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Reality is good but dreams can be good as well both daydreams and night dreams..Thanks for stopping by..The cat missed the birds that time but she does catch some sometimes..Occasionally she gets a chipmonk, squirrel, and a field mouse..Sara

Jack Horne

March 7, 2014 at 2:51 PM

I agree with Nette - awesome work, my friend

Nette Onclaud

March 7, 2014 at 1:32 PM

stark reality can make things ordinary, russell but this piece is definitey extraordinary...love the dry, nonchalant appeal of this artword.. swell job!.. huggs