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Dry Dream World

In the dry dream world There isn’t much normalcy Just strange occurrences here Can be horrid pain That of incredible form Nothing like reality Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2014 2:59:00 PM

reminds me of the idea that our life is actually the dream and our dreams are the reality. Which would mean you would be talking about our lives when we are awake.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/8/2014 9:04:00 AM

It sounds like a nightmare. You have given substance to the darkness in just a few lines.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2014 5:30:00 AM

Wisdom in a nutshell! Beautiful!

Len Gasun

Date: 3/7/2014 9:23:00 PM

This is superb write and form which you've creatively composed in just few lines my dear friend Russell! I love it and kudos to you as always! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2014 2:58:00 PM

Reality is good but dreams can be good as well both daydreams and night dreams..Thanks for stopping by..The cat missed the birds that time but she does catch some sometimes..Occasionally she gets a chipmonk, squirrel, and a field mouse..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2014 2:51:00 PM

I agree with Nette - awesome work, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/7/2014 1:32:00 PM

stark reality can make things ordinary, russell but this piece is definitey extraordinary...love the dry, nonchalant appeal of this artword.. swell job!.. huggs

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/7/2014 9:58:00 AM

A great one Russell , I must say I really enjoy it.Immense thanks for all your visits to my page

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/6/2014 11:55:00 PM

You have a lot of quality descriptiveness in just six lines here.