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Drunken Moon Haiku -Not For Contest

Drunken Moon Haiku smokeless tobacco seeking light from another mooching off the sun loitering in dusk’s drunken aura of darkness last call at sunrise a lone wolf’s farewell song of life’s broken spirit hobos serenade round moon – square window cold framing whiskey’s wisdom red cheeked aftermath John G. Lawless 7/3/2015 written for prompt of DRUNKEN MOON HAIKU

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 6:27:00 PM

Wonderful, John, I love the imagery a 7 Hugs Eve

John Fleming

Date: 7/5/2015 12:52:00 PM

Excellent, John - Some fantastic lines! With a little bit of application these four Haikus could make one hell of a beautiful poem. My very best regards! :) john

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 7:06:00 PM

sweet... sweet it is to read every haiku. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:39:00 PM

Love the lone wolf serenading the moon... glad to see you too are inspired. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 2:26:00 PM

gosh, these are so COOL, John. Why don't you want to enter the contest? If she is asking for just one, I hope you will pick one and submit it separately. My favorites are the second and fourth!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/3/2015 1:22:00 PM

Superb string of haiku with brilliant imagery! Just beautiful! Warmest regards. Pandita

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/3/2015 9:27:00 AM

I love them all especially your last one..Going to my fav! :.)

John Lawless
Date: 7/3/2015 9:36:00 AM

I was just having such a good time with this prompt I kept on writing.