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inebriated by starlit heavenly bliss rich bubbly champagne ----------------------------- Paul Callus~4th July 2015 Contest: Drunken Moon Sponsor ~ Skat A Placed 2nd

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/27/2015 11:01:00 AM

Love the idea of a 'Drunken Moon'. Must look more closely at the sky, wondering what I might have missed. Congratulations on your place Paul ~ Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 7/27/2015 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Delice! Perhaps it was the author and not the moon that was drunk:) All the best. // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2015 1:58:00 PM

Blaming the moon for one's own debauchery. I love this idea, being a sort of lush myself. Love, daver

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 3:01:00 PM

Love your feedback, Dave! Thank you for stopping by:) // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:04:00 AM

Hi Paul, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2015 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! I enjoyed your excellent entry, even though you (and your sis) opted for a modest placement:) Have a lovely weekend! hugs // paul

Abdul Malik

Date: 7/9/2015 10:28:00 AM

I believe your Haiku is what the contest called for. Very nice.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 3:52:00 PM

I am pleased you found this take to your liking, Abdul; it's never easy to find something different from the general trend of thought. All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 12:40:00 AM

Wow Paul what a beauty! A super 7 for this,, congrats on superb win!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thank you, Upma, both for the congrats and the high rating! Enjoyed your winning entry, too:) // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2015 10:01:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your wonderful win hugs eve

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 3:44:00 PM

Always happy to have you pay a second visit, Eve:) Thank you! hugs // paul

David Mohn

Date: 7/8/2015 8:27:00 PM

Wonderful imagination you infused into this one Paul...congrats

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 3:36:00 PM

Thank you David; my muse is easily convinced to cooperate by offering her a drink or two:) // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2015 6:33:00 PM

Ohh I'll drink to that, what a beautiful image, makes for a romantic blissful atmosphere!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2015 3:42:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Casarah. Romantic it is, with a touch of tipsy bliss:) Let's clink glasses:) Cheers! // paul

Constance La France

Date: 7/8/2015 11:11:00 AM

Paul a big congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my drunken poem

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 3:12:00 PM

I enjoyed your winning entry, Constance:) Thank you for stopping by with congrats. All the best. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 9:15:00 AM

Great to see this so high....Congratulations

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 3:10:00 PM

I'm sure I saw yours flying next to mine, Tim:) Thank you! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2015 8:19:00 AM

Perfect! Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Richard; enjoyed your witty entry:) // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/8/2015 5:12:00 AM

What a great write, excellent..........A.M.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 3:07:00 PM

Hi Afolabi! Your praise is music to my ears! Thank you my friend! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/8/2015 4:59:00 AM

I knew this one would come in at the top of the list Paul. Excellent! Congratulations on your number 2 placement. Hugs, Connie

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 2:56:00 PM

Thank you for your unwavering faith, Connie:) Telepathy has a bearing on a judge's mind!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 2:30:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 10:27:00 AM

Many thanks, Jan; I appreciate your support:) hugs // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/7/2015 11:54:00 PM

Your elegant writing style shines in this wonderful haiku... I see it has placed in the contest. Congratulations on that as well, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thank you Kelly; your comments have an elegant touch to them, too:) Appreciate your visit and support. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:41:00 PM

glad to see how well you did with this one. A question for you, how do you get the moving to keep going on in this kind of picture. My blue moon is supposed to continuously cry tears, but I can't get the picture to do it for me. If you can help me, would you let me know in a soupmail?

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I have no magic wand:) It just moves on its own! I visited your blue moon a while ago, and it was 'crying' continuously:)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:32:00 PM

A deservedly high position, Paul- pop a cork. Love it. Well done. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 2:44:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Viv! Thank you. I'l save you a drink:) // paul

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:12:00 PM

Love your drunken mood congrats paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thank you, Lee; you have to see me when I'm sober:) // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2015 10:54:00 PM

Paul, l enjoyed this piece the first go around. Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 2:39:00 PM

Thank you for the congrats and the repeat visit, Alexis:) Glad you enjoyed. // paul

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 10:45:00 PM

Love the bubbly feeling of this haiku Paul, just beautiful..... Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you a lot, Skat:) Will now go visit your usual contest blog. hugs // paul