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Drunken Moon

drinking in the night
fully mooning the night sky
embarrassed sinks low

By Richard Lamoureux
For SKAT's Drunken moon contest.
Written June 4th, 2015.

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Debbie Duncan

July 24, 2015 at 9:01 PM

I like this. Now I see below that you had a great win also :)

Richard Lamoureux

July 25, 2015 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Debbie.

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:07 AM

hi Richard, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

July 11, 2015 at 7:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Scott Thirtyseven

July 10, 2015 at 3:20 AM

Superb wording my friend, well deserved of its high place in the comp.

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2015 at 7:46 AM

Thanks Scott, I'm pleased you like it.

Julia Ward

July 9, 2015 at 11:36 AM

I'm back to give congratulations on your win, Richard. Julia, xx

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2015 at 7:45 AM

Thanks Julia, have a great weekend.

Abdul Malik Mandani

July 9, 2015 at 10:31 AM

Well, I would like the moon mooning all night. Nice one.

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2015 at 7:45 AM

Me too.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2015 at 8:33 AM

Just swinging back to offer my congratulations on a sweet win that I predicted! It's another "7!" And just so you know, the moon moons me all the time as I stare at it! YEAH! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2015 at 7:44 AM

Ha ha, good for you, thanks Pandita.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:04 AM

Great haiku, love the concluding line the most,, Richard! Congrats on ur win!

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 6:42 AM

Thanks Upma

Casarah Nance

July 8, 2015 at 6:40 PM

Haha, funny and clever, nice win my friend..hugs

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 6:43 AM

Just having a bit of fun.

Harry Horsman

July 8, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Oh love this,,congrats Richard

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 11:41 AM

Thanks Harry.

Paul Callus

July 8, 2015 at 11:04 AM

Congrats on your fine win, Richard. Some people take haiku too seriously; I like a bit of humour now and again. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 11:42 AM

I'm not good enough at the form to take it seriously. Thanks for the nice visit Paul.

Jan Allison

July 8, 2015 at 7:47 AM

oh this made me giggle Richard congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Thanks and Hugs back.

John Lawless

July 8, 2015 at 7:18 AM

Ah, the old "double entendre" in a haiku. You are a naughty boy Richard, go to your window. I'll have this picture in my mind all day.

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:02 AM

Ha ha, thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Yours was one of the funniest! Congrats on the win

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:03 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:38 PM

Deservedly highly placed, Richard, well done. Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:03 AM

Thanks so much Viv.

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:21 PM

Lol... Richard congrats loved your drunken moon!

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:04 AM

Thanks Lee.:0)

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 10:58 PM

Richard, love this side of you. LOL..... :) Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:05 AM

My pleasure and a big thanks for choosing my poem.

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 7:53 AM

I've always known that the moon had a darkside. Nice to know it has a backside, too. Fun write, Richard, and good luck. Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux

July 7, 2015 at 8:50 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Wilma Neels

July 5, 2015 at 12:10 PM

hehe, I just love your wit Richard ;) All the best for the contest!

Richard Lamoureux

July 7, 2015 at 8:50 AM

Thanks Wilma.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 5, 2015 at 10:00 AM

Richare, What a fun entry. I will bet she loves it. I did!

Richard Lamoureux

July 7, 2015 at 8:50 AM

I hope so. Thanks Connie.

Julia Ward

July 5, 2015 at 9:21 AM

Thanks, Richard... I saw you had passed by to like my poems... I'm putting another one there soon of my poem already in PoetrySoup called "Aaron Copland".