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Drunken Moon

drinking in the night
fully mooning the night sky
embarrassed sinks low

By Richard Lamoureux
For SKAT's Drunken moon contest.
Written June 4th, 2015.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/24/2015 9:01:00 PM

I like this. Now I see below that you had a great win also :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Debbie.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:07:00 AM

hi Richard, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/10/2015 3:20:00 AM

Superb wording my friend, well deserved of its high place in the comp.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Scott, I'm pleased you like it.

Julia Ward

Date: 7/9/2015 11:36:00 AM

I'm back to give congratulations on your win, Richard. Julia, xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2015 7:45:00 AM

Thanks Julia, have a great weekend.

Abdul Malik

Date: 7/9/2015 10:31:00 AM

Well, I would like the moon mooning all night. Nice one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2015 7:45:00 AM

Me too.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/9/2015 8:33:00 AM

Just swinging back to offer my congratulations on a sweet win that I predicted! It's another "7!" And just so you know, the moon moons me all the time as I stare at it! YEAH! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2015 7:44:00 AM

Ha ha, good for you, thanks Pandita.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:04:00 AM

Great haiku, love the concluding line the most,, Richard! Congrats on ur win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2015 6:42:00 AM

Thanks Upma

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2015 6:40:00 PM

Haha, funny and clever, nice win my friend..hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2015 6:43:00 AM

Just having a bit of fun.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/8/2015 11:14:00 AM

Oh love this,,congrats Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Harry.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 11:04:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win, Richard. Some people take haiku too seriously; I like a bit of humour now and again. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 11:42:00 AM

I'm not good enough at the form to take it seriously. Thanks for the nice visit Paul.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 7:47:00 AM

oh this made me giggle Richard congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thanks and Hugs back.

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2015 7:18:00 AM

Ah, the old "double entendre" in a haiku. You are a naughty boy Richard, go to your window. I'll have this picture in my mind all day.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:02:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:44:00 PM

Yours was one of the funniest! Congrats on the win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:38:00 PM

Deservedly highly placed, Richard, well done. Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Viv.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:21:00 PM

Lol... Richard congrats loved your drunken moon!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:04:00 AM

Thanks Lee.:0)

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 10:58:00 PM

Richard, love this side of you. LOL..... :) Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2015 8:05:00 AM

My pleasure and a big thanks for choosing my poem.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 7:53:00 AM

I've always known that the moon had a darkside. Nice to know it has a backside, too. Fun write, Richard, and good luck. Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/7/2015 8:50:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2015 12:10:00 PM

hehe, I just love your wit Richard ;) All the best for the contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/7/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Wilma.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2015 10:00:00 AM

Richare, What a fun entry. I will bet she loves it. I did!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/7/2015 8:50:00 AM

I hope so. Thanks Connie.

Julia Ward

Date: 7/5/2015 9:21:00 AM

Thanks, Richard... I saw you had passed by to like my poems... I'm putting another one there soon of my poem already in PoetrySoup called "Aaron Copland".

Julia Ward

Date: 7/5/2015 9:03:00 AM

Oops! I'm back to give the 7... I've just realized I didn't put the rating in.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/5/2015 9:10:00 AM

Thanks Julia, I enjoyed your posts on Facebook.

Julia Ward

Date: 7/5/2015 8:38:00 AM

It makes for interesting imagery! A 7. Julia, :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/5/2015 8:52:00 AM

Thanks Julia.