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Drunken Moon

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Moon is hung over

the same scene she lit last night

washed out at sunrise


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Susan Gentry

June 20, 2018 at 11:13 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this creative haiku! Love it.

John Lawless

June 15, 2018 at 5:59 PM

Ah, yes, the sotted moon lingering too long past dawn to squabble with the sun. Nicely done Lycia

Roy Pett

June 15, 2018 at 2:28 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Lycia, very clever haiku. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 15, 2018 at 12:56 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Lycia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

June 15, 2018 at 11:48 AM

Back with podium congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~' *

Heidi Sands

June 15, 2018 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations for your win Lycia :)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 15, 2018 at 8:50 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved top placement! I love this clever haiku! Excellently written! Hugs. Pandita

Constance La France

June 15, 2018 at 8:48 AM

Lycia, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this lovely Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 15, 2018 at 8:43 AM

I love this one Lycia! A potent gem of a little poem. Congratulations on your first place finish in my contest! Thank you for your support! xomo

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:12 AM

Lycia, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Lycia Harding

July 18, 2015 at 5:33 AM

Thank you, Linda! xoxo

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 8:46 AM

I enjoyed Lycia. Congrats.

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 10:51 AM

Hi Richard, Thank you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:25 AM

Congrats Lucia! Wonderful haiku!

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:35 AM

Thanks, Doc!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:25 AM

Sorry the typo error in ur name Lycia!

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:38 AM

O that's okay, I did it myself just this morning. heh heh

Tim Smith

July 8, 2015 at 3:14 PM

Love the imagery Lycia....congrats Tim

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:35 AM

Thank you, Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Great seeing this one again. Congrats to you.

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:34 AM

Thank you Andrea, that contest was fun!

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:51 PM

Love it. Well done, Lycia. Viv x

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:32 AM

Thank you, Viv!

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:43 PM

Congrats great drunken moon : )

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:31 AM

Thank you, Lee!

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 11:05 PM

Hi Lycia, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Lycia Harding

July 9, 2015 at 3:26 AM

Thank you, SKAT. Excellent idea for a contest. Keep 'em comin!

Eve Roper

July 5, 2015 at 6:07 PM

Beautiful imagery a 7 Hugs Eve

Lycia Harding

July 7, 2015 at 11:13 AM

Thank you, Eve! xoxo

Kp Nunez

July 4, 2015 at 11:38 AM

Wow. Very clever! You don't need luck. This will be on the winner's list!

Lycia Harding

July 4, 2015 at 6:13 PM

Thank you, Kim. I don't know, a lot of the heavyweights have entered this contest. We shall see, we shall see...

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2015 at 10:04 AM

I came back to fave this one!!

Lycia Harding

July 4, 2015 at 6:06 PM

Awesome! I love you're enthusiastic comments, they make my day!

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2015 at 9:29 AM

oh YES, that last line really sets this one apart!!

Lycia Harding

July 4, 2015 at 6:05 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I was trying to write it so the last line would apply to each previous line independently while still keeping it's integrity as a tie up for both of them together. Does that make sense?