Drunken Moon

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Moon is hung over

the same scene she lit last night

washed out at sunrise


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/20/2018 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this creative haiku! Love it.
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Date: 6/15/2018 5:59:00 PM
Ah, yes, the sotted moon lingering too long past dawn to squabble with the sun. Nicely done Lycia
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Date: 6/15/2018 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Lycia, very clever haiku. :))
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Lycia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 11:48:00 AM
Back with podium congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~' *
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Lycia :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved top placement! I love this clever haiku! Excellently written! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/15/2018 8:48:00 AM
Lycia, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this lovely Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance
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Date: 6/15/2018 8:43:00 AM
I love this one Lycia! A potent gem of a little poem. Congratulations on your first place finish in my contest! Thank you for your support! xomo
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:12:00 AM
Lycia, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/18/2015 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! xoxo
Date: 7/9/2015 8:46:00 AM
I enjoyed Lycia. Congrats.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 10:51:00 AM
Hi Richard, Thank you!
Date: 7/9/2015 1:25:00 AM
Congrats Lucia! Wonderful haiku!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thanks, Doc!
Date: 7/9/2015 1:25:00 AM
Sorry the typo error in ur name Lycia!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:38:00 AM
O that's okay, I did it myself just this morning. heh heh
Date: 7/8/2015 3:14:00 PM
Love the imagery Lycia....congrats Tim
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thank you, Tim!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 PM
Great seeing this one again. Congrats to you.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, that contest was fun!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:51:00 PM
Love it. Well done, Lycia. Viv x
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:32:00 AM
Thank you, Viv!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:43:00 PM
Congrats great drunken moon : )
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:31:00 AM
Thank you, Lee!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:05:00 PM
Hi Lycia, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/9/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT. Excellent idea for a contest. Keep 'em comin!
Date: 7/5/2015 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful imagery a 7 Hugs Eve
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/7/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! xoxo
Date: 7/4/2015 11:38:00 AM
Wow. Very clever! You don't need luck. This will be on the winner's list!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I don't know, a lot of the heavyweights have entered this contest. We shall see, we shall see...
Date: 7/4/2015 10:04:00 AM
I came back to fave this one!!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:06:00 PM
Awesome! I love you're enthusiastic comments, they make my day!
Date: 7/4/2015 9:29:00 AM
oh YES, that last line really sets this one apart!!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/4/2015 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I was trying to write it so the last line would apply to each previous line independently while still keeping it's integrity as a tie up for both of them together. Does that make sense?
Date: 7/3/2015 6:36:00 PM
Lycia sounds like someone had a little too much. Awesome haiku. wishing you the best... LINDA
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/4/2015 1:12:00 AM
You can call me Linda or PD Lycia, Destroyer sounds out of bound. By the way thank you for commenting my comment. :)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/3/2015 7:08:00 PM
Yeah, maybe that's why she she's so bloated, huh? Ha! Thank you Destroyer. Xoxo
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