Drunken Moon

DRUNKEN MOON  




Intoxicating
Peeping from beyond the clouds
keeping my secrets


BY SHIVANEE BRIDGEMOHAN
DATE:07.03.15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:40 AM
Thanks Everyone
A   Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Shivanee, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:38 AM
Thank you :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Well expressed, congrats!
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:38 AM
Thank you
A. Sharma Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Wow Shivanee wonderful! Congrats on fine win!
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 3:06 PM
A peeping "moon"... I'll keep my eye out for that one...congrats Tim
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:39 AM
lol Thank you living in the Caribbean you see al types of moon
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 12:02 AM
ahhh, I like the personal touch in this one. Congrats.
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:56 PM
Mischievous moon, love it. Well done, Shivanee. Viv x
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Thank you
Carter Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Sweet drunken moon congrats !
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Shivanee Tinkerbelle, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Thank you :)
A   Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 1:14 PM
thank you for commenting my comment PD
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Hi Shivanee, intoxicating, breathtaking haiku. Love the last line.... LINDA
Tinkerbelle Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Thanks so much new at this but want to continue fine my passion again
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