Drunken Moon

DRUNKEN MOON  




Intoxicating
Peeping from beyond the clouds
keeping my secrets


BY SHIVANEE BRIDGEMOHAN
DATE:07.03.15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/11/2015 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Everyone
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:14:00 AM
Shivanee, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/11/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/9/2015 8:52:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats!
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/11/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/9/2015 1:31:00 AM
Wow Shivanee wonderful! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 7/8/2015 3:06:00 PM
A peeping "moon"... I'll keep my eye out for that one...congrats Tim
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/11/2015 6:39:00 AM
lol Thank you living in the Caribbean you see al types of moon
Date: 7/8/2015 12:02:00 AM
ahhh, I like the personal touch in this one. Congrats.
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Date: 7/7/2015 11:56:00 PM
Mischievous moon, love it. Well done, Shivanee. Viv x
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/11/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/7/2015 11:50:00 PM
Sweet drunken moon congrats !
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Date: 7/7/2015 11:11:00 PM
Shivanee Tinkerbelle, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/11/2015 6:39:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/4/2015 1:14:00 PM
thank you for commenting my comment PD
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:11:00 PM
Hi Shivanee, intoxicating, breathtaking haiku. Love the last line.... LINDA
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Shivanee Tinkerbelle
Date: 7/3/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thanks so much new at this but want to continue fine my passion again
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