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Drunken Moon

sitting on the moon above the whole world below where are my refills Njeri, 7.3.2015 Drunken moon contest By STAT A

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:09:00 AM

Njeri, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 7:01:00 AM

Fun one, shoulda brought a bartender with you. Congrats Njeri.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:15:00 AM

How lovely njeri! Congrats on big win!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 12:41:00 PM

This is lovely and sweet, Njeri:) More refills, eh!! Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Hannington Mumo

Date: 7/8/2015 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your over-deserved win. Such nifty pieces make the excellent verse that spins the wheels of muse...

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 7/8/2015 9:25:00 AM

Hi Njeri...very well done...congrats on your win...rgds, 7bang

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:49:00 PM

oh, this one is so cute!!! Congrats for win

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:45:00 PM

Sounds like your party's not over, njeri. Well done. Viv x

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:32:00 PM

Great drunken moon congrats!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:01:00 PM

Love it, Njeri, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/3/2015 3:20:00 PM

Very clever haiku with superb imagery - perfect for the contest! Best of luck! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/3/2015 3:09:00 AM

weeee this one a cute one.. =0 magnetic!~Olive Eloisa

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/3/2015 3:14:00 AM

Lol, what just happened? I guess am really drunk. Thank you Olive!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/3/2015 3:11:00 AM

Lol thank u Linda for your visit. And yes, lunesta is in the house with all its happiness :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 2:56:00 AM

LOL, Lunesta in the house... Somewhere Over the Moon. ""love it"" I've enjoyed your entry. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/3/2015 3:13:00 AM

Lol thank you Linda for your visit. And yes, lunesta is in the house with all its happiness :-)

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/3/2015 2:10:00 AM

LOL! Hey, you may have refills, just make sure you have a ride...cute drunk! :-)

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/3/2015 3:04:00 AM

:-) am trying my bestest, but my balance is deciding other things. ..

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 7/3/2015 2:17:00 AM

Lol, since am so high up on the moon, i think my refills fell on earth. :-) thanks Kim