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Drunken Moon

sitting on the moon
above the whole world below
where are my refills




Njeri, 7.3.2015
Drunken moon contest
By STAT A

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Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:09 AM

Njeri, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 7:01 AM

Fun one, shoulda brought a bartender with you. Congrats Njeri.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:15 AM

How lovely njeri! Congrats on big win!

Paul Callus

July 8, 2015 at 12:41 PM

This is lovely and sweet, Njeri:) More refills, eh!! Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Hannington Mumo

July 8, 2015 at 10:10 AM

Congratulations on your over-deserved win. Such nifty pieces make the excellent verse that spins the wheels of muse...

Thabang Ngoma

July 8, 2015 at 9:25 AM

Hi Njeri...very well done...congrats on your win...rgds, 7bang

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:49 PM

oh, this one is so cute!!! Congrats for win

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Sounds like your party's not over, njeri. Well done. Viv x

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:32 PM

Great drunken moon congrats!

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 11:01 PM

Love it, Njeri, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Very clever haiku with superb imagery - perfect for the contest! Best of luck! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 3, 2015 at 3:09 AM

weeee this one a cute one.. =0 magnetic!~Olive Eloisa

Njeri Hunjeri

July 3, 2015 at 3:14 AM

Lol, what just happened? I guess am really drunk. Thank you Olive!

Njeri Hunjeri

July 3, 2015 at 3:11 AM

Lol thank u Linda for your visit. And yes, lunesta is in the house with all its happiness :-)

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 2:56 AM

LOL, Lunesta in the house... Somewhere Over the Moon. ""love it"" I've enjoyed your entry. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Njeri Hunjeri

July 3, 2015 at 3:13 AM

Lol thank you Linda for your visit. And yes, lunesta is in the house with all its happiness :-)

Kp Nunez

July 3, 2015 at 2:10 AM

LOL! Hey, you may have refills, just make sure you have a ride...cute drunk! :-)

Njeri Hunjeri

July 3, 2015 at 3:04 AM

:-) am trying my bestest, but my balance is deciding other things. ..

Njeri Hunjeri

July 3, 2015 at 2:17 AM

Lol, since am so high up on the moon, i think my refills fell on earth. :-) thanks Kim

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