Drunken Moon

lazy celestial show
moon slowly drowns
into ocean's night horizon


By: Teddy Kimathi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:42 PM
TEDDY, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
Kimathi Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Thank you so much Linda, for your warm applause!!! *^_^* <3 <3
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Congrats on another awesome win with this wonderful write Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Thank you so much once again Dr. Upma! *^_^* <3
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Thanks Skat! *^_^* <3
A   Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Linda! *^_^* Love, Teddy.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:53 AM
One of the best I have read! Congrats!
Kimathi Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thank you Richard! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Upma! ^_^
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:46 PM
very nice, lines two and three are outstanding
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Thank you for passing by Andrea! :-) I am humbled by your applause! *^_^*
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Well done, Teddy, nice one. Regards, Viv
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Thank you for enjoying my read Viv! :-)
Carter Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Nice drunken moon congrats on your win!
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thank you very much for your applause Lee! :-)
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Your contests always rock! *^_^* <3 <3
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:24 AM
You are welcome Skat! Thank you for your applause and morale support. Regards, Teddy.
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:57 AM
Teddy, love your take. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Linda! You are such an INSPIRATION to me! ^_^
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