Drunken Moon

lifeless phantom floats  

moonlit waves of white flecked foam

forgotten relic

By: Eve Roper 7/2/2015

boatmoonhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:13 AM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Eve Roper

July 11, 2015 at 9:48 AM

Thank you dear friend hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 8:47 AM

I love the poem and picture you chose, an excellent pairing. Pour me a glass of moon beams! Congrats on your win Eve.

Eve Roper

July 9, 2015 at 9:36 AM

I thought yours was wonderful, I first thought of a glass of Champagne but then I changed my mind I'm glad you used it

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:27 AM

Ah very wonderful Eve! Congrats on fine win!

Eve Roper

July 9, 2015 at 9:37 AM

Thank you so much , Dr. Upma A. Sharma , Hugs Eve

Tim Smith

July 8, 2015 at 3:12 PM

Wow...this is beautiful Eve...congratulations Tim

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:12 PM

Thank you so very much for your warm visit and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

July 8, 2015 at 1:27 PM

Glad to see this lovely entry on the winners' list, Eve! congratulations! hugs // paul

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:13 PM

Thank you,Paul, so very much for your warm visit and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Thabang Ngoma

July 8, 2015 at 9:32 AM

Hi Eve...congrats on this profound Haiku...rgds, 7bang

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:14 PM

Thank you, Thabang, so very much for your warm visit, inspiring compliment, and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:56 PM

wow you did a great job with this one. Congrats to you.

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:15 PM

Thank you,Andrea, so very much for the congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:53 PM

Love the slightly skeletal, bleak feel to this one, Eve. Well done. Viv x

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

Thank you so very much, Viv, for your inspiring complement, and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Hi eve loved your drunken moon congrats!

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

Thank you so very much, Lee, for your inspiring complement, and congratulations. Hugs Eve

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 11:05 PM

Eve, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:43 PM

You skillfully and creatively knew what to do with this theme and produced a wonderful haiku! Love it and rate it a 7! Good luck in the contest, Eve! Pandita

Eve Roper

July 8, 2015 at 6:17 PM

Thank you so very much for your inspiring complement, and 7. Hugs Eve