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tonight's horizon slices the moon into two--- wounds are licked by waves ________________________ For Skat's Drunken Moon Contest By Carrie Richards 7/2/15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:02:00 AM

Carrie, I finally made my way down here.... By far this was my fav. Since I first laid eyes, on this reflection, I felt every sore, aching for another moonlight. Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 12:35:00 AM

And back again with big congrats Carrie! Awesome haiku n win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2015 6:29:00 PM

Oh wow that is brilliant! wounds left in the waves, what a spectacular ending!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2015 6:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/8/2015 10:52:00 AM

Ooohhhh........... I can hear hear the moon's sounds as it's getting sliced. I respect your imagery Carrie! Congrats for your WIN Skat! *^_^*

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 10:34:00 AM

Really beautiful, Carrie! A very unique take on this theme. 'Wounds left in the waves' is so emotional...but fortunately salt helps to heal the wounds! Congrats on your top spot win:) // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 9:06:00 AM

This is fantastic Carrie...congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2015 8:15:00 AM

Beautiful! Congrats.

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2015 6:54:00 AM

WOWZA!!! Great take on the theme Carrie and a well deserved top spot

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/8/2015 4:55:00 AM

ohhhh, this is a number one for you Carrie. Beautifully done! Kudos on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 2:27:00 AM

wonderful haiku - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:36:00 PM

ALL RIGHT. I knew it was a chart topper!! Congrats

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:27:00 PM

Great interpretation, Carrie, and a worthy win. Jolly well done, young Lady. Viv x

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:05:00 PM

Congrats on your beautiful drunken moon!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 10:33:00 PM

Carrie, I enjoyed the double deep blue imagery. The trace of it all.... Congratulations on your number one win. I hope you enjoy the win, as much as I enjoyed your entry. SKAT

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/4/2015 4:11:00 PM

Believe me Carrie you didn't need the picture. it is all there in this a wondrous Haiku...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 7:46:00 PM

Awesome, Carrie.I hear that you are in the lead!!!

David Mohn

Date: 7/3/2015 7:00:00 PM

Phenomenal Carrie…ditto on the other comments as well

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 9:56:00 PM

If anyone tops this I'll be amaze..... Carrie, why didn't I come up with the slice in two moon imagery. The way you end the haiku is deeper than the sea.... Love this. A high 7, plus. .. I'm jealous. Hugs....

Constance La France

Date: 7/2/2015 8:21:00 PM

Carrie, this haiku is so visual and lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my poem breaking my heart