Drunken Brio

Rendered your elixir within flowing fire turned my head till flames got higher 'neath vapors' influence lustfully burning, imbibed upon insatiable blushed lips feverish craving ignited darkly melting hours intoxicated of ravenously absorbed flamings zealous ardor pulsing beyond desires, hungry to the bone poured of unrelenting fervor skin soaked in mania's intensified voracity, unrestrained cries out resonating wanton tongues dizzying gypsy soul dripping sinfully impassioned liquid quenching glow farther impulsive madness, scent of mounting sensitivity's rush marinating 'neath rhythmical torrid undulations gushing through every explosively satiated vessel, breathlessness melded 'tween kindled ascendancy exploiting drunkenness of volatile ardent spirits “Drink wine. This is life eternal. This is all that youth will give you. It is the season for wine, roses and drunken friends. Be happy for this moment. This moment is your life.” Omar Khayyám

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/19/2016 11:57:00 AM

Wow! Drunken in lustful desire and passion! Reminds me of Bacchus, love, wine and wanton intoxication...soaking in poetic language. Red wine for me, pls...in moderation:) Regards // paul

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 3:06:00 PM

I'm floored by your response, Bacchus, what an honor to be in the same breath. Thrilled you enjoyed it Paul! :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/19/2016 10:57:00 AM

Well, I'm always ready for a good glass of wine (or two). This one knocks it out of the park Paloma and the cool thing about this poem is, no hangover the next morning. Love it.

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 3:04:00 PM

I never thought about that, thanks Chris! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/18/2016 9:39:00 PM

Hi Paloma, Wine you say? I think I'll pass.You penned a well written piece. I must say you write really well. It had a nice flow and fun content. Well done:-) Alexis

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 4:56:00 AM

More for me. :) Thanks Alexis.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/18/2016 8:03:00 PM

I used to imbibe but gave it all up when my children were born. This is a really fun read, Paloma:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/19/2016 4:56:00 AM

Funny that, usually people start drinking when they have kids. :) Thanks Daniel.

White Wolf

Date: 10/18/2016 6:53:00 PM

What an awesome poem, thoroughly enjoyed it, though it's a tad early over here for wine right now, Haha, does cider count? /|\

Paloma P
Date: 10/18/2016 7:02:00 PM

It's more a Friday night kind of poem. :) Whatever makes you happy, cheers. Thanks so much Rick.