Notes About The Poem

Poetry/Free Verse/Drums and Flutes
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1568-445-08
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written August 08, 2023

Submitted to the International Contest,  Read Me!
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 12/06/2023

First Place

 

Drums and Flutes



and the drums beat, beat, beat
and flutes and voices float
and the eagle
calls me
and the wolves howl, howl, howl
oh, a wind is whistling, whirling, whispering
come, come, come
and in the stillness
I am an Ojibway girl
seeking my lost heritage
I bow to the grandfather spirits
in the sky
telling them with respect
that I am
trying to find my place
 
and the drums beat, beat, beat
and the flutes and voices float
and the eagle calls me
and the wolves howl, howl, howl
and a lone eagle feather drifts down
from the sky
as a gift from the eagle spirit
to give me courage and strength
for my journey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:09 AM
How strange i did comment on this congratulating you.. but it disappeared.. must have been difficult for you to pick a poem... you have thousands .... congrats on being showcased..
La France Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations, appreciate, yes, it was a difficult choice. Soup has all kinds of glitches these days it seems.
Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Wow i love the video used also here and for some reason as i read this i thought of valhalla, has a viking touch to your imagery and the echoing wordplay. Ah then i see its more of ojibway! How good! Very creative write. Pleasure reading this. Congrats on being on winners list
La France Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Ink, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate
McBride  Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:57 AM
Beautiful and soothing music and video, with an amazing poem to follow, wish you the best on your journey, : )
La France Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, I love this music, blessings !
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace