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Drummers Lament

You hypnotised my drums as they beat a rhythm from deep within my soul in the spirit of love Watch me exploding outside as the temperature rises each beat getting stronger putting me in this magical world As my drum beats echo how I feel inside I bathe within it's beauty As I beat harder on the walls of my heart I want the world to hear you and me Together till the end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/1/2013 7:27:00 PM
Whom ever you wrote this for, I think you would make beautiful music together....Very nice rhythm and flow to your words here. Well done!....Thank you for suggesting it, I liked it very much! And, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my work, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
THE PLEASURE IS READING AND WRITING ONE DAY LIKE YOURSELF I HAVE WON A FEW PRIZES ON POEMS DAUGHTER AS ONE MY ROSE WAS THE OTHER I HAVE OTHERS I HAVE NOT POSTED YET ONE DAY JUST TO CREATE THE MASTER PIECE THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/24/2013 3:52:00 PM
Love is the present..So yes love is till the end of time..just beautiful! Im glad I got to read your poems today..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/24/2013 8:37:00 PM
thank you from the heart deeply appreciated beautiful comment deeply appreciated

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