Drummers Lament

You hypnotised 
my drums 
as they beat 
a rhythm 
from deep 
within my soul 
in the spirit 
of love 

Watch me 
exploding outside 
as the temperature rises 
each beat 
getting stronger 
putting me in 
this magical world
 
As my drum beats echo
how I feel inside 
I bathe 
within it's beauty 

As I beat harder 
on the walls 
of my heart 
I want the world 
to hear 
you and me
 
Together 
till 
the end 
of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Whom ever you wrote this for, I think you would make beautiful music together....Very nice rhythm and flow to your words here. Well done!....Thank you for suggesting it, I liked it very much! And, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my work, Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:23 PM
THE PLEASURE IS READING AND WRITING ONE DAY LIKE YOURSELF I HAVE WON A FEW PRIZES ON POEMS DAUGHTER AS ONE MY ROSE WAS THE OTHER I HAVE OTHERS I HAVE NOT POSTED YET ONE DAY JUST TO CREATE THE MASTER PIECE THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Chircop Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Love is the present..So yes love is till the end of time..just beautiful! Im glad I got to read your poems today..
Mcdaid Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:37 PM
thank you from the heart deeply appreciated beautiful comment deeply appreciated
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