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Drowning In a River of Tears

Germany scored seven goals, poor Brazil is awash with tears Guess they won’t need any rainfall for at least a hundred years Jan Allison 9th July 2014

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James Fraser

Date: 7/19/2014 12:19:00 PM

Passions abound in life, whether it be music, poetry or sports. Many a poem has brought a reader to tears, or even a song. That's what makes us all special and different, nice short piece Jan :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 12:23:00 PM

(((( Hugs )))) back at you Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2014 12:20:00 PM

Thanks James for commenting on my poem:-) just read blank page to hubby he loved it too! Hugs jan xxx

Keith Merritt

Date: 7/9/2014 9:29:00 PM

The funny thing about that game is how Brazilians blame MICK JAGGER , of all people for the loss. It seems that every team he roots for loses. They've labeled him "Cold Foot". Love the rhyme, Jan !

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2014 2:10:00 PM

LOL Keith. Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vera Duggan

Date: 7/9/2014 7:31:00 PM

Great two lines Jan, I saw it on TV last night and I could not believe how anyone could get caught up in a game and as for the tears well what is wrong with the world today, it is a just a game after all, do people cry when they lose at Monopoly, my opinion, take care my friend........Vera.........

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2014 2:09:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Vera:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 3:03:00 PM

Ha, good one, I liked tim's additional joke. :-P funny

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2014 3:09:00 PM

me too Casarah thanks for dropping by with your comment as ever. hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2014 7:42:00 AM

It was so sad to watch Jan..with all the tears in the stands...The joke floating around is Germany scored two more times on the ride back to the hotel.lol.....hugs and love Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2014 7:58:00 AM

For sure..lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2014 7:54:00 AM

LOL Tim - I didn't see the match but just been to see dad and he said about drowning n a river of tears so i couldn't resist - tee hee Bet a few of the players scored back in the hotel too LOl Love and hugs back Jan xxxx