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Drowning In A Daylight Nightmare

Where are we heading Human nature helplessly wondering Mother Nature hopefully warning.. A submerged universe By a torrent of floods curse What is coming hope not worse.. A world of less and less meaning For all those on the surface floating Solid grounds nolonger touching.. To what is occurring inside unaware Unable to see the gloom and void in the air Drowning in a daylight nightmare.. Trapped in a web of wealth and profusion Full to the brim the sight in confusion Bathing in fathomless wells of delusion.. Where is your balance if I dare ask Why in a fake glory you still bask When will you wear off your dehumanised Mask ? The Lighthouse for so long deserted Its Light and compass inverted The human mission there is simply averted.. A universe of less and less essence Thrown into oblivion its inner balance Wholes falling into holes of decadence.. Minds seized in captivity Souls stained in their Beauty Bodies withered in passivity.. Human bonds with iron fists ruled With velvet gloves Man is fooled In Humankind decay well schooled.. Detached I keep observing Absorbed I am suffocating Involved my voice spilling.. Would I to life flow surrender Stop considering the offender And being a determined defender.. I am but a word devotee Addressing every bel esprit In my heartfelt poetry.. Inspired by the latest masterpiece of my dearest friend and poetess Maria Williams.

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Hiba Junaid

Date: 4/2/2025 3:56:00 AM

This poem carries such a profound and urgent message—both a warning and a lament for the state of humanity. The imagery of drowning, delusion, and imbalance is striking, making the reader feel the weight of a world slipping away from its true essence. The rhythmic flow and repetition add to its impact, reinforcing the call for awareness and change. A powerful, thought-provoking piece! Also, I just adore the title. Be Blessed, always - Hiba :)

Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/2/2025 11:28:00 AM

Ah Besma, I am so happy that a few words of mine made someone happy in return. It's just the most wonderful feeling. Your poem, and your pen are both deserving of all the compliments. Love the way you write. Best wishes, Hiba <3

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/2/2025 10:30:00 AM

My joy and pleasure beyond measure! My dear Hiba, how elated and rewarded I am by your so appreciative and elevating feedback! So blessed I am to have you passionately read and artistically comment on my humble poetry! A deep gratitude to you for honouring my words.. THANK YOU SO MUCH! God bless you. Best regards.

Maria Williams

Date: 12/20/2024 4:06:00 AM

My dearest Besma,your poem beautifully captures a reflective yet thought-provoking journey through humanity's challenges. Despite its serious themes, it has a rhythm that feels almost like a gentle nudge—an invitation to pause, ponder, and perhaps change course. The lighthouse metaphor shines brightly, even in the darker tones, offering hope that balance and meaning can still be found. A wonderful piece that speaks to the soul with both concern and care. Love and light always my dear, your words are heard loud and clear. How lovely that you mentioned and were inspired by my poem. From the bottom of my heart thanks so much my dearest friend. Love and Hugs always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/21/2024 12:56:00 AM

I am the one deeply grateful to you for your inner Light and Beauty! You just inspire whenever you set your beaming fire! You have ever been here not just for me rather for every single beautiful soul whose chambres of heart are open and willing to embrace your Light and insight.. You have been here with your Art and words from the heart to help add to and beautify the world ! You make a huge difference in this world with all that you produce and compose.. I am truly humbled and hugely thankful for all that you have done and still doing to impress with what you express.. to print a genuine legacy of yours and humbly mark souls.. So much obliged to you my dearest friend Maria for your ongoing support, your generosity and kindness.. thank you so much for being YOU, a beautiful soul of remarkable humility.. a poetess of grandeur and Light.. a sweet great lady! God bless you.. Love and hugs.

Maria Williams
Date: 12/20/2024 4:18:00 AM

You deserve a POTW on this wonderful poem that captures and calls out for people to pay attention. Alas I do so hope there are enough of us who care to make the difference, we can only join together and pray....Hugs

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2024 12:03:00 PM

I am but a word devotee Addressing every bel esprit In my heartfelt poetry.. I love those lines and how well your poem rhymed... you talk about a reality that is very worrying... I like how you self reflect with deep introspection and have expressed a poem straight from your heart.. Your poem is a passionate plea for change, framed in a tone of urgency, despair, and hope.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/16/2024 12:56:00 PM

Indeed! A harsh reality that weighs so heavy on Humanity.. a so frightening decay accompanied with a feeling of helplessness.. Still we always try to attain the light and have hope in a better world and place..Thank you so much, Silent One for a so rewarding feedback! Your appreciation means a lot to me.. I'm deeply humbled and grateful. God bless you. My deepest regards.

Valsa George

Date: 12/3/2024 7:22:00 PM

These are the concerns worrying only a few with conscience. What happens around doesn't affect many as they are so engrossed in earning wealth, comforts or power. Watching the moral decadence around, we ask where our world id heading to. There is widespread violence and bloodshed with no humaneness. All qualities of the heart and spirit have become outdated. I am sure these concerns have sprung from your sentient heart. As one who loves man and God and as a poet, you wish to voice your fears and spread the message of peace, love and tolerance through your poems. Thank you dear Besma for reminding us of the dangers, the posterity is going to face and the need to raise our voice, instead of being a detached observer. Loved this sweetly rhyming poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/10/2024 12:50:00 AM

A deep gratitude to God for all His blessings showered upon us.. A wholehearted gratefulness to His Grace for empowering us with the blessing of awareness and sight.. But the feeling of helplessness is consuming.. the world is undergoing a scary decay.. and we are not just observing in ache but striving to find a way to help lessen the harm and better the world.. Your rewarding response is of great beauty and insight my dear Valsa.. With beautiful souls, like you, we can release a sigh of relief and hope for better place, universe where we can raise our voice loud and song for a rising Humanity! Thank you so much for your kindness and profound insightful words.. my deepest regards. Love and hugs.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/3/2024 7:28:00 AM

Alas, my kind friend, you have touched a sore wound in this humanity. All sorts of sins are ruling this world. Greed, scandals, murder (especially of the unborn), gluttony, lack of charity and lust. You have described the ills of this world so well. You deserve a POTD for this poem. We pray constantly, but I am afraid all is in vain. Humanity insists on performing evil. Only God can save us—a great poem. God bless you.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/3/2024 8:45:00 AM

Indeed, Victor, the ache is so deep! Evil is reigning and having an upper hand especially on the youth.. Those who have the power, either in positions or material wealth are ruining our humanity.. They have themselves lost it because of their alienation from their inner harmony, peace and spirituality.. so they want to deprive us at any cost of our humanity and all that is good in us.. what is happening is so frightening! No more values.. no more pillars.. no more authenticity.. Even mother Nature is suffering and protesting and warning humankind.. Only God, the Almighty, can save us.. I keep praying for His Grace, forgiveness and mercy.. Let's hope after such decay and darkness Light reigns.. Thank you so much, Victor for your insightful feedback appreciative words.. God bless you.