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Drowning

John was losing his mind over Mary. For days by her house he would tarry. But she knew him not Giving him no thought. Now he lives on rye whiskey and sherry.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2015 1:37:00 AM

poor guy and now drowning in his drink!!sad but FUNNY.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/21/2015 8:36:00 AM

Alcohol isn't the answer to life's challenges. In fact, it creates problems rather than solving them, as we both know. . . . Thanks for taking time to comment, Andrea.

Jadazzle United

Date: 9/12/2015 5:11:00 PM

clever but sad Paul - have written about unrequited love too:-( hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/18/2015 8:25:00 AM

Alcohol is never the answer, as we both know. I suppose hundreds of thousands of people worldwide try to drown their sorrows in drink, which usually ends up causing their deaths. It is, indeed, sad. . . . As always, I value and appreciate your comment.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/9/2015 5:46:00 PM

I enjoyed this ... CayCay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/9/2015 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, CayCay. I value and appreciate your comment. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones.