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Drowning

stop pretending you care, you never loved me but your eyes filled with bliss my every day i know i'm not her, i'm not trying to be all my hopes of acceptance will fade away polite words of love do me harm stop saying things you dont believe i could cover my corpse with your arm but its worthless since you shall deceive i dont want to admit who you are the purpose itself is in vain depressed angels could start war seeing my dieing reflectons of pain please tell my weak heart you cant you are not, you shall never be tru for,my love,deep dreams i shall haunt everytime black leaves are drowning in dew

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Date: 12/5/2024 1:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:39:00 AM
Iacomi Neta,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:38:00 PM
Hi Iacomi neta, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ..SKAT
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