Drowning

There was a time I thought I'd be my own end woke up in the sky and thought It was the ocean drowning in all my fears and devotions Life got me mixing and sipping potions I am pumped with toxins I am out of options

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Date: 8/14/2021 5:24:00 AM

In the writing world it is so hard to physically paint what you are writing about in the readers mind, but with each poem you effortlessly did that. Not only that, I noticed how each poem had a rhyme scheme. Having both elements I previously mentioned is extremely hard to achieve. Many people can write, but only a few can truly convey imagery and evoke emotions just from words. And from your words, I could genuinely feel that the poet (you) who wrote this carries a lot of pain and love. Even if you don’t, by just reading all your poems anyone would think so - that’s how powerfully well written each one is. You really have talent and I can genuinely see others using yours poems one day.Keep up the amazing work!

Jazzlee Clark
Date: 8/15/2021 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words. They really mean a lot and are truelly appreciated

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/28/2021 6:10:00 AM

Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!