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Drowned By Love

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She was the vastness of the oceans I, sailing the seas Enjoying her swells, her too and fro She would entice me with blue dreams of lore I would sail away from the safety of the shore I was the lonely boat, with nothing but loves delusions Heading over the horizon Traveling inside seasick daydreams On the high seas I sailed full of hope Not quite knowing, the ocean Well she was handing me the rope My heart tied in sailors knots Love it seems, was all for not I lie now, with empty heart Below As she the sea has fully consumed The soul of me Blackness is now all that I can see Deception buried in my coffin Thus setting me free

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/12/2016 12:59:00 AM

Very nice...

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/29/2016 8:17:00 AM

Excellent write; only the coffin can truly set us free. Good stuff.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2016 2:59:00 AM

Enjoying this poem a lot my dear friend, Art. A7. Happy Weekend! Thanks for sharing! love and hug, galeo

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:38:00 AM

Thank you for such sweet words! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2016 11:03:00 AM

My favorite line...enjoying her swells...her to and fro. WOW. That was something there, my dear. Great write.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:36:00 AM

I was sure you would like this one! :) :) hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2016 1:31:00 AM

ohh, you really got me in knots, arthur...whoot!..huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:36:00 AM

Thanks Nette! :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/7/2016 9:29:00 PM

Great write Arthur, my favorite line is "traveling inside seasick daydreams"..best wishes

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:35:00 AM

Thank you kindly Joseph!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2016 7:53:00 PM

This will melt the ladies hearts Arthur!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:35:00 AM

Thanks Richard, and I wish! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2016 6:04:00 PM

WOW, I love this kind of poetry, swimming in metaphors!! A BIG seven for this one, ARthur. one of your best!! (soupmail)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! So sweet of you! :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/7/2016 12:46:00 PM

Deep and thought provoking, this poem is well worth sailing through, but never quickly for each line deserves savoring. Creatively done, Arthur ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/15/2016 10:33:00 AM

Thank you so much CayCay! Hugs