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drought leaves leaves

drought leaves leaves crisp, fairytale floating, arresting their sizes and shapes

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Christina Bowring

Date: 11/7/2023 3:31:00 PM

This is such a lovely Monoku dear Kim. Love your artistic choice of words and the vivid imagery created through them. I too, love, ‘ fairytale floating’- delightful! Pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you, :):)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Christina!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2023 8:13:00 AM

Your poem brings forth the images of leaves swirling in air. Enjoyed your creative description, my friend: fairytale floating.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2023 7:59:00 AM

Denied color is large portions of the woods this fall because of the drought. Great work telling about the problem. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:16:00 AM

My dad told me there is a drought…I had no idea! Hopefully it will rain. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2023 7:15:00 AM

- ... playing in the wind ... lovely, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:16:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/7/2023 4:54:00 AM

the sensation of walking on these leaves, a good piece for reading , thanks Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:17:00 AM

My grandson asked me, as we walked along, if I liked the crunching noise of the leaves…why, yes, yes I do!

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/6/2023 5:02:00 PM

Life fruit falling prematurely...if to ripen, whether animal or vegetable, we need cooperation from the elements.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:18:00 AM

We do indeed but at least my husband has been able to corale the leaves…get a good start.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/6/2023 3:27:00 PM

Such a pleasure to read you today, Kim. This was so imaginative. Amazing really...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for you kind words!