drought leaves leaves

drought leaves leaves crisp, fairytale floating,
                                            arresting their sizes and shapes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 3:31 PM
This is such a lovely Monoku dear Kim. Love your artistic choice of words and the vivid imagery created through them. I too, love, ‘ fairytale floating’- delightful! Pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you, :):)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Thank you, Christina!
Pandit Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Your poem brings forth the images of leaves swirling in air. Enjoyed your creative description, my friend: fairytale floating.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Denied color is large portions of the woods this fall because of the drought. Great work telling about the problem. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:16 AM
My dad told me there is a drought…I had no idea! Hopefully it will rain. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 7:15 AM
- ... playing in the wind ... lovely, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Rolland Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 4:54 AM
the sensation of walking on these leaves, a good piece for reading , thanks Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:17 AM
My grandson asked me, as we walked along, if I liked the crunching noise of the leaves…why, yes, yes I do!
DiMino Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 5:02 PM
Life fruit falling prematurely...if to ripen, whether animal or vegetable, we need cooperation from the elements.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:18 AM
We do indeed but at least my husband has been able to corale the leaves…get a good start.
Hind Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 3:27 PM
Such a pleasure to read you today, Kim. This was so imaginative. Amazing really...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Thank you for you kind words!
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