Dropped My Mirror

dropped my mirror 
   yesterday
fractured me   across the floor
so many   many
   dismayed mes   looking up at me
   staring   staring 
from that oh-so-shattered
splintered   everywhere
   looking glass 
of mirrored
broken me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jullion Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Hi, and thanks for your comment... both of your observations are correct.
Hawley Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 9:43 AM
So literally your mirror broke? OR is there a metaphor here for the broken mirror really meaning your broken and shattered life? Just curious. Also welcome to Soup, there is all kinds of good stuff here to read, explore, learn with and use so enjoy your time.
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