Droned To Death

In this last strike, how many did you lose? We lost four....oh wait it’s you? You don't know and they don't show, they showed two but we lost four, my parents and poor two more. 

They sit silent behind the doors, shut up and say no more. Talk about peace, but mean just ****. We intend no harm, we mean just peace. But how can we proceed, when they hit us with such speed? All our hopes and dreams are shattered, but to them, does it really matter? 

At times, I think it will be over soon, or maybe it's just a dream. May be I'll wake up one day and see my mom, my dad and me, talk and laugh like we are free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/20/2015 9:27:00 PM
Came back today to read one more from your page, Hasan. This is a compelling, emotional yet intelligent read. Brilliant in its sadness. A 7. Will be back for more later, thank you. HUgs and smiles. :D Kim
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Date: 5/22/2014 4:38:00 AM
A great write, my friend. I like the flow of words and how you have covered a sensitive topic with such brilliance. Do check out the numerous resources on this site to learn more about the various elements and forms of poetry. Taha
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:50:00 PM
Hasan, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:40:00 AM
Hey Skat....thanks for your nice words :) I am passionate about writing...I was informed about poetry soup by a friend and I thought that I should give it a try, so I did and I feel happy to see that there are so many like me who love to write.....I am a Pakistani, born and raised and I want to promote peace and love through my poems. Hugs to you too.....HASAN JAVED :)
Date: 4/18/2014 12:02:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Hasan :) - I choose your first great and moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2014 12:14:00 PM
Hey Anne thanks for reading my poem. I will sure post some more. And I feel good about writing and sharing my thoughts like most of you here....keep in touch and stay blessed
Date: 4/18/2014 8:43:00 AM
hi Hasan, , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/18/2014 10:29:00 AM
Hey there! Thanks for the invitation....and yes I am inspired to write another one, in fact I am working on it. I sure will look into this contest page, thanks again!!
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