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Drizzle's Cleansing Rite

Mild drizzle soaks on pane; and hums gently like day’s cleansing rite easing breaths, tired: heart lifts up as mist floats. 8/7/2019 August Ninette Contest of Caren Krutsinger

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2019 1:50:00 PM

'hums gently' -- delightfully depicted, nette! Drizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzle! :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2019 2:22:00 PM

Dear Nette, a gentle flowing ninette - love the imagery - good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/10/2019 11:28:00 AM

I enjoyed this beautiful poem Nette :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2019 8:04:00 AM

- Lovely written, Nette ... I'll send you buckets of rain ... you can use them when you need it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 8/8/2019 11:55:00 PM

When the atmosphere is clean we do breathe in life better. Succinct power punch! Big Hugzz

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2019 6:00:00 PM

Mist floats...was reading the emotive experience of a weather person watching heavy fog. At one point she was watching and almost fell losing her balance...the experience exhilarating. Most of us don’t have the patience. Nice one! Enjoyed!