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Drizzle of Rain

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rain WHISPERS dreams … 
              a dawn full of expectations, joys, blessings 
                    bougainvillea SWAYS … with lemon-scented breeze…

                         wind RUSTLES TINKLING cadence of love…
                               a panorama of pearlescent clouds glide by …
                                     carrying longings from yonder hills
        DRIP drop rain…SWISH me to an enchanting wonderland..
                    where a meandering river HUMS a perfect lullaby
                                              rain MURMURS dreams 


                                       I whisper to you..
             a melody emanated from rhapsody of euphoric CUCKOOS
                  in exuberance of their happiness, they 
                        can’t hold their joy, their mesmerizing sonata
                                    serenading the world,

       So is ours ....a love so serene and pure,
           softest DRIZZLE of rain brings us close to MUTTER 
                                               to each other 
                                                   We are….together..
                                                      rain WHISPERS dreams. 


                            


                                         October 17, 2021
                 Inspired By "Onomatopoeia" Premiere Poetry Contest
                                       Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Onomatopoeia words used: Whisper, Sway, Rustle, Tinkle, Swish, Hum, Murmur, Cuckoo, Drizzle, Drip, Mutter (11 words)
                                            FIRST  PLACE
                                           
                         "My Favourite 2021 Poem" Poetry Contest
                                         Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2022 1:20:00 AM

Reading this I feel the calming coolness of the first drizzle on a summer day ! Beautiful Malabika ! Congratulations too !

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/11/2022 11:19:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/11/2022 8:36:00 PM

"panorama of pearlescent" - flowery language and poetically rich writing. Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 12:22:00 PM

such a beautiful poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Appreciate your kind comment.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/16/2021 12:38:00 AM

A beautiful exquisite pen, so romantic..dear Mala... with Onomatopoeia adding more beauty ...like sweet melody to the ears... Loved the rich imagery painted through your verse ... Hearty congrats on your TOP win in this contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Anitha. Appreciate your kind comment.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2021 9:06:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on this win. A beautiful write and picture. I love this. Have a blessed autumn day..............

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/14/2021 6:54:00 AM

Love this! Congratulations and God bless you. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thanks, Gina. Appreciate your kind comment.

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/14/2021 5:29:00 AM

WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thanks, Beata. Appreciate your kind comment.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/14/2021 4:32:00 AM

Such a lovely poem, Mala, congratulations:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thanks, Jo. Appreciate your kind comment.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/13/2021 5:35:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Malabika, congratulations on your win in Emile’s contest… Belle

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/18/2021 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Belle. Appreciate your lovely comment.

John Watt

Date: 11/13/2021 5:15:00 PM

What a dreamy landscape and soundscape you have painted with your luminescent words, dear Mala. You were easily up to the challenge of finding and including onomatopoeia words, and your palette of imagery and sensory lushness flow from your heart. I particularly enjoyed the lines, 'a panorama of pearlescent clouds glide by … carrying longings from yonder hills'. Well done, my friend, and congrats with your Emile win, which is indeed an honour. Blessings to you ~ John

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/15/2021 4:16:00 PM

Thanks, John. Your comments bring so much delight and inspiration.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/13/2021 11:11:00 AM

Mala, your beautiful, romantic poem lyrically drips with luscious imagery and murmurs with tenderness in the sway of your poetic stanzas. The music of love! Congratulations on your win dear friend! Hugs and much love.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/15/2021 4:15:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Appreciate your lovely comments.

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/13/2021 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations Malabika! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. The quality of the poems entered was outstanding and yet yours rose to the top, it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/13/2021 11:20:00 AM

Thanks, Emile. I feel so honoured. I consider these contests as steps of my learning. Really appreciate your lovely comment.