Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

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Drizzle of Rain

rain WHISPERS dreams … 
              a dawn full of expectations, joys, blessings 
                    bougainvillea SWAYS … with lemon-scented breeze…

                         wind RUSTLES TINKLING cadence of love…
                               a panorama of pearlescent clouds glide by …
                                     carrying longings from yonder hills
        DRIP drop rain…SWISH me to an enchanting wonderland..
                    where a meandering river HUMS a perfect lullaby
                                              rain MURMURS dreams 


                                       I whisper to you..
             a melody emanated from rhapsody of euphoric CUCKOOS
                  in exuberance of their happiness, they 
                        can’t hold their joy, their mesmerizing sonata
                                    serenading the world,

       So is ours ....a love so serene and pure,
           softest DRIZZLE of rain brings us close to MUTTER 
                                               to each other 
                                                   We are….together..
                                                      rain WHISPERS dreams. 


                            


                                         October 17, 2021
                 Inspired By "Onomatopoeia" Premiere Poetry Contest
                                       Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Onomatopoeia words used: Whisper, Sway, Rustle, Tinkle, Swish, Hum, Murmur, Cuckoo, Drizzle, Drip, Mutter (11 words)
                                            FIRST  PLACE
                                           
                         "My Favourite 2021 Poem" Poetry Contest
                                         Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Valsa George January 12, 2022 at 1:20 AM Reading this I feel the calming coolness of the first drizzle on a summer day ! Beautiful Malabika ! Congratulations too !

Beata Agustin January 11, 2022 at 11:19 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex January 11, 2022 at 8:36 PM "panorama of pearlescent" - flowery language and poetically rich writing. Congratulations!

Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM such a beautiful poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Jan. Appreciate your kind comment.

Anitha Jayasankar November 16, 2021 at 12:38 AM A beautiful exquisite pen, so romantic..dear Mala... with Onomatopoeia adding more beauty ...like sweet melody to the ears... Loved the rich imagery painted through your verse ... Hearty congrats on your TOP win in this contest... Hugs... ~ Ani Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Anitha. Appreciate your kind comment.

Paula Goldsmith November 14, 2021 at 9:06 AM Back with "Congratulations" on this win. A beautiful write and picture. I love this. Have a blessed autumn day..............

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2021 at 6:54 AM Love this! Congratulations and God bless you. Love, Gina Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:25 PM Thanks, Gina. Appreciate your kind comment.

Beata Agustin November 14, 2021 at 5:29 AM WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:25 PM Thanks, Beata. Appreciate your kind comment.

Joanna Daniel November 14, 2021 at 4:32 AM Such a lovely poem, Mala, congratulations:) Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:25 PM Thanks, Jo. Appreciate your kind comment.

Beryl Edmonds November 13, 2021 at 5:35 PM Beautiful poetry Malabika, congratulations on your win in Emile’s contest… Belle Malabika Ray Choudhury November 18, 2021 at 5:24 PM Thanks, Belle. Appreciate your lovely comment.

John Watt November 13, 2021 at 5:15 PM What a dreamy landscape and soundscape you have painted with your luminescent words, dear Mala. You were easily up to the challenge of finding and including onomatopoeia words, and your palette of imagery and sensory lushness flow from your heart. I particularly enjoyed the lines, 'a panorama of pearlescent clouds glide by … carrying longings from yonder hills'. Well done, my friend, and congrats with your Emile win, which is indeed an honour. Blessings to you ~ John Malabika Ray Choudhury November 15, 2021 at 4:16 PM Thanks, John. Your comments bring so much delight and inspiration.

Sam Kauffman November 13, 2021 at 11:11 AM Mala, your beautiful, romantic poem lyrically drips with luscious imagery and murmurs with tenderness in the sway of your poetic stanzas. The music of love! Congratulations on your win dear friend! Hugs and much love. Malabika Ray Choudhury November 15, 2021 at 4:15 PM Thanks, Sam. Appreciate your lovely comments.

Emile Pinet November 13, 2021 at 10:21 AM Congratulations Malabika! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. The quality of the poems entered was outstanding and yet yours rose to the top, it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry. Very well done my friend, Emile. Malabika Ray Choudhury November 13, 2021 at 11:20 AM Thanks, Emile. I feel so honoured. I consider these contests as steps of my learning. Really appreciate your lovely comment.

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2021 at 1:54 PM wow, I think I HEAR a winner here!!! Malabika Ray Choudhury October 28, 2021 at 5:08 PM Thanks, Andrea. You are very kind!

Paula Goldsmith October 23, 2021 at 2:43 PM Your "Drizzle Of Rain" is a beautiful write. I love the rain. Yes, "rain WHISPERS dreams." Have a blessed autumn day.............. Malabika Ray Choudhury October 28, 2021 at 5:07 PM Thanks, Paula. I love the sound of rain!